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as trickles hum to glossy oaks and skies--- come waltz me in the symphony of rain enshrining charms adored .... though moon decries love gone: just let night’s movement whirl again. in love’s tempo as beats far roll to sigh of final dance-steps drenching our goodbye. Contest: A Rhyme In 60 for Laura Loo 1/25/2017 Checked with howmanysyllables and pure-rhyme counter

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Date: 2/3/2017 7:54:00 AM
You are always so "poetic" when writing your lovely poems Nette. I love your style.
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Date: 2/2/2017 7:01:00 PM
wonderful imagery, Nette. I really liked reading your poem!
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Date: 2/1/2017 4:18:00 PM
Hi Nette, congratulations on your win....a delicate and moving piece!
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Date: 2/1/2017 2:46:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win Nette
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Date: 2/1/2017 1:58:00 PM
I'm sorry I missed this tender write..congratulations dear poet
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Date: 2/1/2017 12:36:00 PM
Well done nette!!! So touching!! Big Hugggs and Congratulations!!! Love ya , deb
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Date: 1/26/2017 10:09:00 AM
Lovely poem, nette. Good luck:)
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Date: 1/25/2017 10:07:00 PM
A beautiful dance and a great poem...best wishes
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Date: 1/25/2017 5:48:00 AM
Erotic dance of inspiration and poetry dear, nette! A seven!
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Date: 1/24/2017 4:02:00 PM
Love this nette, ok, so your final dance, keep the poems coming.
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Date: 1/24/2017 1:47:00 PM
am missing something A poem with rhyme scheme: A-B-A-B-A-A? ?TEN syllables in each line (60 syllables in all)
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Date: 1/24/2017 1:43:00 PM
- Beautiful and moving final dance, Nette - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/24/2017 1:16:00 PM
I just loved this one. Great write.
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Date: 1/24/2017 12:18:00 PM
This was beautiful Nette, such a wonderful poem of dancing with the one you love. I could hear a moonlit melody as I read this. Much luck in the contest.
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Date: 1/24/2017 11:29:00 AM
Impressive, Nette! Nicely done and good luck to you /|\
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Date: 1/24/2017 11:13:00 AM
Very nice Nette! Good luck in the contest. :)
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