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tank filled with green crud
on the bottom like a spud…
goldfish was a dud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Sweetheart Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 6:08 AM
excellent example of the eco car my friend.. will try to entertain u with my entry luv.
Mehta Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 5:32 AM
Enjoyed the haiku with apt images, Robb
Dietrich Avatar
May 17, 2011 at 9:36 PM
Hey, that goldfish was a troublemaker!!
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