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Filled With Imaginings

When leaves glimmer, I find some way To dance on tiptoes’ whirled ballet, Into the prairie, soft the light As mesmerizing views invite; Nature’s art weaving hues midair With fancy blooms dressed, while I share All wonders of a heart that unfurl, Such pageant for my inner girl! In this moment, thrilled eyelids close Relishing dew, fireflies that pose On endless trails of humming tones , Where magic rune never postpones My floating gasp as lit hours stand; Like blue oaks… in tints ever grand That a dream- world becomes a song, Here… where imaginings belong! 2/15/2016 For Rob Carmack's Scrwed X1 Contest Posted 1/29/2016

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Date: 3/8/2016 7:53:00 AM
Hi Nette. Congrats on your well, deserved top placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 3/7/2016 12:17:00 PM
Nice win....Linda....
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Date: 3/2/2016 2:59:00 PM
Great last line. Congratulations.
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Date: 3/2/2016 11:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place in Rob's contest. I'm delighted to read your beautiful poem written with that intense feeling of innocence. Keep up your great work, Nette! Hugs, Andrew.
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Date: 3/1/2016 10:23:00 PM
Beautifully written, Nette. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 3/1/2016 9:37:00 PM
Congrats on getting "unscrewed" Nette. Nicely written.
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Date: 3/1/2016 7:30:00 PM
tremendous Nette...big congrats to you :)
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Date: 3/1/2016 4:17:00 PM
Back to say Congratulations on your first place write. You have a beautiful childlike imagination that keeps your heart pure. Peace my friend:)
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Date: 2/26/2016 12:34:00 AM
Looking down the list I found this gem.
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Date: 2/3/2016 1:15:00 AM
I am lost in your imagination...
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Date: 2/2/2016 12:11:00 AM
I reflexively become a co-dreamer while reading the nice poem. Nice!
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Date: 1/30/2016 7:46:00 PM
tremendous imagery, great imagination, Cheers, Craig
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Date: 1/29/2016 11:12:00 PM
Your expressive words always transport me to another realm, Nette! Magical :)
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Date: 1/29/2016 8:15:00 PM
oh, I sure do like the blue oaks in there, Nette. A beautiful poem on imagination.
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Date: 1/29/2016 4:48:00 PM
Reads like a winner in Shadow's contest..Way to go..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 1/29/2016 11:04:00 AM
Magical! I am transported to another place suspended by time. Clicking my shoes here! Nice to see your comments, thank you!
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Date: 1/29/2016 9:57:00 AM
Let your inner girl twirl! Imaginings feed the art...Another lovely write, Nette! huggs
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Date: 1/29/2016 8:21:00 AM
- Let your dreams come true, beautiful Nette - I wish you a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/29/2016 8:17:00 AM
You takes us far and wide, and i just love the ride!
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Date: 1/29/2016 7:31:00 AM
Very beautiful, flows very well eith lots of imagery. Well done.
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