Filled With Imaginings

When leaves glimmer, I find some way
To dance on tiptoes’ whirled ballet,
Into the prairie, soft the light
As mesmerizing views invite;
Nature’s art weaving hues midair
With fancy blooms dressed, while I share
All wonders of a heart that unfurl,
Such pageant for my inner girl!

In this moment, thrilled eyelids close
Relishing dew, fireflies that pose
On endless trails of humming tones ,
Where magic rune never postpones
My floating gasp as lit hours stand;
Like blue oaks… in tints ever grand
That a dream- world becomes a song,
Here… where imaginings belong!


2/15/2016
For Rob Carmack's Scrwed X1 Contest
Posted 1/29/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kimathi Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 7:53 AM
Hi Nette. Congrats on your well, deserved top placement in the contest!!! ;-)
A   Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 12:17 PM
Nice win....Linda....
Smith Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 2:59 PM
Great last line. Congratulations.
Crisci Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 11:28 AM
Congratulations on your first place in Rob's contest. I'm delighted to read your beautiful poem written with that intense feeling of innocence. Keep up your great work, Nette! Hugs, Andrew.
Williams Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 10:23 PM
Beautifully written, Nette. Congratulations on your win.
Lawless Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 9:37 PM
Congrats on getting "unscrewed" Nette. Nicely written.
Mohn Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 7:30 PM
tremendous Nette...big congrats to you :)
Turner Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 4:17 PM
Back to say Congratulations on your first place write. You have a beautiful childlike imagination that keeps your heart pure. Peace my friend:)
Peterson Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 12:34 AM
Looking down the list I found this gem.
Salehi Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 1:15 AM
I am lost in your imagination...
Gupta Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 12:11 AM
I reflexively become a co-dreamer while reading the nice poem. Nice!
Emu Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 7:46 PM
tremendous imagery, great imagination, Cheers, Craig
Leiser Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 11:12 PM
Your expressive words always transport me to another realm, Nette! Magical :)
Dietrich Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 8:15 PM
oh, I sure do like the blue oaks in there, Nette. A beautiful poem on imagination.
Kendrick Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 4:48 PM
Reads like a winner in Shadow's contest..Way to go..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Mara Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 11:04 AM
Magical! I am transported to another place suspended by time. Clicking my shoes here! Nice to see your comments, thank you!
Nunez Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 9:57 AM
Let your inner girl twirl! Imaginings feed the art...Another lovely write, Nette! huggs
Andresen Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 8:21 AM
- Let your dreams come true, beautiful Nette - I wish you a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Horsman Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 8:17 AM
You takes us far and wide, and i just love the ride!
Turner Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 7:31 AM
Very beautiful, flows very well eith lots of imagery. Well done.
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