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Filled With Ebon Veins

Loaded with spilt oil the tanker delivers its cargo ashore from the sea Man-woman pressed destiny has relentlessly decreed to forge steel Rust has settled unkindly by ‘progress’ corroding its soul while wood With tamed worms could have shed shredded sails for steady repair Midnight toil from tarred ravens in sable omens omit void and despair They mock as they engulf soiled meaning tar feather and frighten the light Depleted the torch has twisted the anchor croaking the stuttering engine Smeared the sunken tree of beauty fails to seed timid remains of dark timber Vessels return their burden back to lost hearts blemish inspiring breath Blood streams of innocence painted in shadows struggle to deliver their Essence when disempowered streams of kind conscious love’s passion Miscarry luminous shipments consign a cemetery of grave splintered cross When the fork in the road waves to wrecked ships and turbulence reckons As seemingly empty we choose whether droplets of thirst are half full or drained Cantankerous storms may lead to new compass with the needle carved out From slumbering lumber setting tentative cruise for the passage of time 06th June 2018 Written for contest: Filled with Ebon Veins

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Date: 6/16/2018 10:33:00 PM
Well penned, Kai. Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 6/8/2018 10:00:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Kai :)
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 6/9/2018 4:03:00 AM
Thank you for your appreciation and many wishes, Kai
Date: 6/8/2018 8:14:00 AM
- A short greeting and congratulations on your great winning poem, Kai :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 6/9/2018 4:01:00 AM
Thank you Sunshine Smile.
Date: 6/8/2018 7:34:00 AM
"cantankerous storms" great metaphor dear Kai, great poem all together! thank you and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 6/9/2018 4:01:00 AM
Thank you so much Laura Loo. I appreciate that. Many wishes to you, Kai
Date: 6/6/2018 5:52:00 AM
- Great ... well done - A poem I liked very much ... thanks, Kai :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 6/6/2018 8:28:00 AM
Thank you Lise. I am not getting as much writing done as I wish at the moment. We are actively planning to relocate from South Africa to Spain. Lots of hugs, Kai
Date: 6/6/2018 5:41:00 AM
i love love LOVE it ! very descriptive and that is simply great !! Thank you ^^ :)
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 6/6/2018 8:29:00 AM
Hi Paris, thank you for that compliment. My ship is sailing quite nicely at the moment. Lots of wishes, Kai

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