Filled With Ebon Veins

Loaded with spilt oil the tanker delivers its cargo ashore from the sea
Man-woman pressed destiny has relentlessly decreed to forge steel
Rust has settled unkindly by ‘progress’ corroding its soul while wood
With tamed worms could have shed shredded sails for steady repair

Midnight toil from tarred ravens in sable omens omit void and despair
They mock as they engulf soiled meaning tar feather and frighten the light
Depleted the torch has twisted the anchor croaking the stuttering engine
Smeared the sunken tree of beauty fails to seed timid remains of dark timber

Vessels return their burden back to lost hearts blemish inspiring breath
Blood streams of innocence painted in shadows struggle to deliver their
Essence when disempowered streams of kind conscious love’s passion
Miscarry luminous shipments consign a cemetery of grave splintered cross

When the fork in the road waves to wrecked ships and turbulence reckons
As seemingly empty we choose whether droplets of thirst are half full or drained
Cantankerous storms may lead to new compass with the needle carved out
From slumbering lumber setting tentative cruise for the passage of time

06th June 2018

Written for contest: Filled with Ebon Veins
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 10:33 PM
Well penned, Kai. Congrats on your top win.
Sands Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 10:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Kai :)
Neumann Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 4:03 AM
Thank you for your appreciation and many wishes, Kai
Andresen Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 8:14 AM
- A short greeting and congratulations on your great winning poem, Kai :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Neumann Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 4:01 AM
Thank you Sunshine Smile.
Scars Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 7:34 AM
"cantankerous storms" great metaphor dear Kai, great poem all together! thank you and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
Neumann Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 4:01 AM
Thank you so much Laura Loo. I appreciate that. Many wishes to you, Kai
Andresen Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 5:52 AM
- Great ... well done - A poem I liked very much ... thanks, Kai :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Neumann Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 8:28 AM
Thank you Lise. I am not getting as much writing done as I wish at the moment. We are actively planning to relocate from South Africa to Spain. Lots of hugs, Kai
Boreham Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 5:41 AM
i love love LOVE it ! very descriptive and that is simply great !! Thank you ^^ :)
Neumann Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 8:29 AM
Hi Paris, thank you for that compliment. My ship is sailing quite nicely at the moment. Lots of wishes, Kai
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