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Filled With Awe

When a bright star shone over Bethlehem shepherds bedded their flocks and went to see a miracle that soon overwhelmed them curious at what its meaning could be. Shepherds bedded their flocks and went to see a baby in a manger filled with straw, curious at what its meaning could be feeling both humbled and yet, filled with awe. A baby in a manger filled with straw, the son of God, born of a virgin birth. Feeling both humbled and yet, filled with awe they knelt before Jesus, the king of Earth. The son of God born of a virgin birth, a miracle that soon overwhelmed them. They knelt before Jesus, the king of Earth, when a bright star shone over Bethlehem. (Pantoum) 01,04,2020

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Date: 1/26/2020 1:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful poem and picture......
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/26/2020 9:31:00 PM
Thanks Paula, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/26/2020 3:13:00 AM
Hello Emile This is beautifully composed. I really enjoyed this meaningful read and congratulations on your high placement.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/26/2020 8:54:00 AM
Thanks Wendy, as always I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/26/2020 12:47:00 AM
What a beautiful poem to share at Christmas time Emile. I am so happy to see this in first place. It is very deserving. Congratulations! xxoo
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/26/2020 8:52:00 AM
Thanks Connie, I very much appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/25/2020 8:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your very well-deserved win, Emile. I want to thank you for entering my contest. The birthday of Jesus is my favorite time to remind me of why I am blessed. Your poem had great flow, perfect rhyme , and imagery. Hugs Eve
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/26/2020 8:51:00 AM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate the placement and your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/5/2020 7:17:00 PM
This is precious. Well written.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/6/2020 8:20:00 AM
Thanks Juliet, I appreciate your support, Happy Holidays my friend, Emile.

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