Fill the Holes

We tend to look away from the unpleasant things in this world instead of stepping in and helping. This is a great piece Micheal. I have not had a lot of time for writing and reading over the summer but hopefully in winter I can get back in the swing of things. Enjoy you writing. Hope all is well. God Bless Phyl

hi Michael this is a great write, while telling a story as well, man has dominated man to his own injury, and thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my writes, take care D-nyce you might like my write on the men of poetry soup.

i wish more people thought like you but unfortunatly we live in a world that is changing. john h loving iii

This is just excellent. I like the way the poem develops from line to line. The message is wonderful. Man has the ability to create and destroy. Hopefully, he will always create. Great job! ~Joseph

There is a lot of depth to this poem Much to think about in your words. I've already read it a few times. The title is fitting for this piece. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. Karen

a great piece of warm poetry, enjoyed reading this.

Very deep and well expressed, Michael... Dorian

You have seen a lot here , Michael and said much . Great insight .....

Good Morning Michael....Very thoughtful poem here. We tend to look away too often at the things that are unpleasant in this world. If only we could come together and heal this world that was given to us. Provocative and honest look at our world here, there are so many voids that need filling. We need reminders like this every day...maybe each of us can do our part, a little at a time. Reaching out to each other like this is one little thing we can do .....Nice work!....Carrie