Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

Fill My Essence

Daylight melts into 
the night as its rays 
softly fade
mysterious moonbeams 
enchanting my world 
in colors of jade

Hands dance upon 
my skin as I float 
on the night's 
whispering breeze 
Touching me in 
such a way a
breath that's a 
warm wanting tease

You came and filled
my essence night's 
as a cool breeze kisses
Sending chills through 
me in silent 
whispering glimpses

7/2/2020

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Aditi Mishra July 7, 2020 at 8:10 AM Your muse has such a soft soothing magical essence Brenda. Congratulations on your win. Much love :)

Paula Goldsmith July 5, 2020 at 11:02 AM Congratulations on your win. Your pen was writing romantic verses. Enjoy your win and day.................. Brenda Chiri July 5, 2020 at 11:34 AM Thank you so much!;)

Kai Michael Neumann July 5, 2020 at 6:02 AM Wonderful. Congratulations. Kind wishes, Kai Brenda Chiri July 5, 2020 at 7:01 AM Thank you so much Kai you are so kind!;)

Winged Warrior July 5, 2020 at 3:42 AM Congrats!! sissy-poo...#1, yahoo!! :o)~bro bro Brenda Chiri July 5, 2020 at 7:00 AM Lol ahhh bro bro how are you my dear brother?;) I have missed you most of all!;) thank you I do hope the unicorns are well?!;)

John Watt July 4, 2020 at 4:35 PM Hi Brenda, beautiful poem... I love the lines "mysterious moonbeams enchanting my world in colors of jade". Congrats on winning first place with this gem ~ John Brenda Chiri July 4, 2020 at 4:49 PM Thank you John so much! So glad you liked it!;)

Connie Marcum Wong July 4, 2020 at 4:28 PM This is really lovely Brenda. I see why it is a top winner! Congratulations! Blessings xxoo Brenda Chiri July 4, 2020 at 4:35 PM Connie I so glad you enjoyed it thank you!;)

William Kelii Kekaula July 4, 2020 at 3:13 PM Breathless inspirations, Brenda, my compliments truly, for achieving 1st Place -- Aloha~@William Brenda Chiri July 4, 2020 at 4:35 PM Thank you William appreciate it very much;)

James Marshall Goff July 3, 2020 at 6:06 AM Sweet delight Brenda...james Brenda Chiri July 4, 2020 at 4:34 PM Thank you James I appreciate your comment!;)

John Hamilton July 2, 2020 at 9:39 PM Silent whispering glimpses now that's poetry! Well done Brenda! Brenda Chiri July 2, 2020 at 10:15 PM Lol thank you so much John! I really appreciate your comment! ;)

Tom Cunningham July 2, 2020 at 3:43 PM Nice to see your romantic verses Brenda, hope you're well. Tom Brenda Chiri July 2, 2020 at 4:16 PM Tom thank you! I’m working on coming back but always a pleasure to read your words!;)