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Fill My Essence

Daylight melts into the night as its rays softly fade mysterious moonbeams enchanting my world in colors of jade Hands dance upon my skin as I float on the night's whispering breeze Touching me in such a way a breath that's a warm wanting tease You came and filled my essence night's as a cool breeze kisses Sending chills through me in silent whispering glimpses
7/2/2020

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Date: 7/7/2020 8:10:00 AM
Your muse has such a soft soothing magical essence Brenda. Congratulations on your win. Much love :)
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Date: 7/5/2020 11:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your pen was writing romantic verses. Enjoy your win and day..................
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/5/2020 11:34:00 AM
Thank you so much!;)
Date: 7/5/2020 6:02:00 AM
Wonderful. Congratulations. Kind wishes, Kai
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/5/2020 7:01:00 AM
Thank you so much Kai you are so kind!;)
Date: 7/5/2020 3:42:00 AM
Congrats!! sissy-poo...#1, yahoo!! :o)~bro bro
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/5/2020 7:00:00 AM
Lol ahhh bro bro how are you my dear brother?;) I have missed you most of all!;) thank you I do hope the unicorns are well?!;)
Date: 7/4/2020 4:35:00 PM
Hi Brenda, beautiful poem... I love the lines "mysterious moonbeams enchanting my world in colors of jade". Congrats on winning first place with this gem ~ John
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/4/2020 4:49:00 PM
Thank you John so much! So glad you liked it!;)
Date: 7/4/2020 4:28:00 PM
This is really lovely Brenda. I see why it is a top winner! Congratulations! Blessings xxoo
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/4/2020 4:35:00 PM
Connie I so glad you enjoyed it thank you!;)
Date: 7/4/2020 3:13:00 PM
Breathless inspirations, Brenda, my compliments truly, for achieving 1st Place -- Aloha~@William
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/4/2020 4:35:00 PM
Thank you William appreciate it very much;)
Date: 7/3/2020 6:06:00 AM
Sweet delight Brenda...james
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/4/2020 4:34:00 PM
Thank you James I appreciate your comment!;)
Date: 7/2/2020 9:39:00 PM
Silent whispering glimpses now that's poetry! Well done Brenda!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/2/2020 10:15:00 PM
Lol thank you so much John! I really appreciate your comment! ;)
Date: 7/2/2020 3:43:00 PM
Nice to see your romantic verses Brenda, hope you're well. Tom
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/2/2020 4:16:00 PM
Tom thank you! I’m working on coming back but always a pleasure to read your words!;)

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