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Figure In the Mist

My path built from nothing Mere twine and sticks for constructing My path to success Leading me to be a figure in the mist. All alone I built with purpose Yet insecure at the surface Quickly constructing my road to success While my faith fades Like a figure in the mist. My path strengthened By stealing other boards And trust dissipates Like a figure in the mist. My path to success Leaves laughter depressed As I love my love in fortune And my peace in doom For my path was not one for joy But rather one for title As I become a mere figure in the mist.

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