Jack Ellison Poet Limerick

Fighting For a Parking Spot

Sitting in my car waiting for my Cathie dear
Not everybody's as nice as us, I fear
Fighting for a parking spot
Tempers sure flare a lot
A wonder they didn't kick each other in the rear


© Jack Ellison 2015

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Laura Breidenthal October 18, 2015 at 5:08 PM So true, how people can get so worked up over such trivial things. I quite like this one, Jack! Very nicely done. Always, Laura

Tim Smith October 15, 2015 at 1:27 PM Lay down flat and hold that spot...a patient man you're surely not...orange cone or two....or dye your dew....be sure they see you or you'll be splot Jack Ellison October 16, 2015 at 11:13 AM Certainly don't need to dye my doo! LOL Cheers, Mr. Tim

Carol Eastman October 15, 2015 at 10:19 AM It's even worse for the Handicapped spot... As others want them an aweful lot... But those that succeed do get caught... Leaving others food for thought... As Yep, They get caught! Carol Eastman October 16, 2015 at 1:08 PM Ours are usually mostly empty too... Making a few people want to sneak into them. Jack Ellison October 16, 2015 at 11:12 AM Around here the spots are usually not totally filled... guess us Canadians are a heaLthy lot!!!! LOL xxx

Judy Konos October 15, 2015 at 9:01 AM Get a handicap sign....and let them fight...lol... Jack Ellison October 16, 2015 at 11:08 AM Actually with my brain, I would certainly qualify!!! LOL Love. the old handicapped dude!!! Love, Jake xoxox

Michael Tor October 15, 2015 at 8:07 AM Jack its not the parking spots that are the problem its the people fighting for them. Nice point. GOOD MORNING JACK! Go Blue Jays Jack Ellison October 15, 2015 at 8:20 AM GOOD MORNING MICHAEL me friend! You are absolutely right!!! Cheers!

Jan Allison October 15, 2015 at 7:11 AM It's a world wide issue Jack - prefer to use the bus and then I write poems on my journey lol:-) hugs Jan xx Jack Ellison October 15, 2015 at 8:18 AM Great idea!!! Less stress and time to create!!! Love, Jack xxx