Fighting

watchful eyes
they wait
one-two-three on the couch
eyes on me
dirty hands and feet
tear stained faces
one brother leaning on the other
thats enough
my mother-voice says
for one day
aren't you sorry at all?
They look down then up
but God bless them
they dont grin 
they are tired now
too tired to fight any more
even with me
the big one
fixes his brother's ice pack
and they wait for their sentence:
bath and bed
I'll hold them here a minute
just so I can remember
these
faces.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Christian Avatar
July 2, 2009 at 2:22 AM
aww a good poem its true siblins do fight , kids always fight my sisters were all older than me so I know how it feels to be the one getting picked on, thanks for your kind comments God bless you
Al-Riyami Avatar
July 2, 2009 at 1:54 AM
Rofl=)I always end up this way with my braw.Good luck in the contest
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