Fighters

the fighters emerge
one has a trident and net
the other a sword and shield
looking for chances
they circle one another
the net man traps and stabs – death

for Amy’s chokehold choka contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
June 7, 2012 at 5:49 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Amy's contest Jack. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
June 6, 2012 at 8:39 PM
HI, Jack. Nice to see you on the list here with me today. congrats on your win. I sure remember this one!
A   Avatar
June 6, 2012 at 7:02 PM
JACK Congratulations with your wonderful win, In AMY GREEN'S contest. take care;-) ~ Always PD
Guzzi Avatar
June 6, 2012 at 6:24 PM
Congrad's on your win Light & Love
Cornwall Avatar
May 10, 2012 at 9:15 PM
lmao@this winner...Patrick
Dietrich Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 3:46 PM
Jack, you did nicely with this one. maybe I can give it a try when I lay out in the sun today. I hope to finish here in an hour so I can do that!!!
Kendrick Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 4:15 PM
Good one..Got a laugh..Thanks for stopping by my Chocolate work..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Sara
Brown Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 12:22 PM
A pleasure to read your poetry today Jack and I wish you the best in the contest. I will try to come back later this week to read more. I have a spring cold and not up to reading for too long. Have a wonderful week. Love, Carol
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