Tricia Campese Poet Free verse

Fight Or Flight Reaction To You

I don't know how to say it...
Words are so hard with you.
You make them alive, 
the metaphorical black spiders inside.
And everything feels hazy.
I'm weak with you, in the best ways 
possible. 
Weak and sinking into you...
I love the feeling, I can just let go.
Relax my muscles, and let my heart 
pump slow. 
Here I go,
again. 
Just looking at you read, 
your eyes alight with love and
the best intentions.
I some how feel weak..

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James Swartz July 17, 2017 at 1:31 AM You have so many great poems i had a hard time choosing which one to leave a comment on. I think for right now this is my favorite of yours. It could change and by tomorrow the monsters or the generic might take it's place. Please keep writing and definitely keep sharing. Tricia Campese July 26, 2017 at 12:41 PM Wow...thank you so much. I love having so much support on here, your comment seriously made me tear up a bit. It's great to know people actually appreciate my hard work. I can't thank you enough, really.

Chris Green February 28, 2017 at 6:43 AM I could really feel this one. That feeling of longing is strong in your words. Nicely done. Tricia Campese March 1, 2017 at 7:13 AM Thank you, this is one of my favorite pieces I've written!!

Darren White February 28, 2017 at 2:22 AM Metaphorical black spiders inside... Very beautifully expressed. Tricia Campese February 28, 2017 at 6:36 AM Thank you so much!!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart February 27, 2017 at 7:38 AM Well penned, riveting expression of feeling. 7 Tricia Campese February 27, 2017 at 7:17 PM Thank you :)

Doug Vinson February 26, 2017 at 10:08 PM Nicely, deliciously done, Tricia. : ) Tricia Campese February 27, 2017 at 7:17 PM Thank you so much!