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Fight For Life

People need to realize,

Never to give up a fight.

It is their birth right,

To live a better life.

A life full of love,

full of happiness.

A life full of vibrations,

Vibrations of the feel,

The feel which makes us sing,

The feel which makes us dance,

The feel which makes us alive.

Oh,how I wish.

I could make people realize,

Never to give up a fight.

Copyright © Mad Hu | Year Posted 2012

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Keith Bickerstaffe Date: 7/8/2012 9:40:00 PM Such an inspirational piece! Nicely composed and expressed, with fine rhyming and flow. BRAVO! Best wishes, Keith Login to Reply Mad Hu Date: 7/9/2012 1:05:00 AM Thanks for posting yor comment:)

Tonya Turner Date: 7/6/2012 12:03:00 PM Oh how I wish you could do that as well. Sometimes it's just easier to give up as sadly as that may be. Great write. Login to Reply Mad Hu Date: 7/9/2012 1:02:00 AM true.Giving up is sad.Thanks for yor comment:)

Don Johnson Date: 6/14/2012 2:56:00 AM ifn ya get down ...spring up like a young mountain goat, n go on... Login to Reply Mad Hu Date: 6/14/2012 3:46:00 AM absolutely true and thanks for the comment

Dan Kearley Date: 6/8/2012 9:53:00 PM Right on!.....So keep writing on! :o) Login to Reply Mad Hu Date: 6/14/2012 3:47:00 AM thank you

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/14/2012 7:27:00 AM You are right in all your lines here in this poem Mad. Very well written, it is good! - oxox love from Anne-Lise (never give up!) Login to Reply Mad Hu Date: 5/14/2012 9:10:00 PM Thanks Anne for such encouraging words.

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 5/14/2012 5:20:00 AM Yes, I agree with you, never give up a fight. Nice poem and meaningful poem. Enjoyed. Login to Reply Mad Hu Date: 5/14/2012 9:11:00 PM thanks for the comment

David Williams Date: 5/14/2012 4:14:00 AM Mad, evocative words, thanks for your comments..David Login to Reply Mad Hu Date: 5/14/2012 4:38:00 AM Thank you

Sirisha P Date: 5/14/2012 4:05:00 AM Ya its true "Never to give up a fight". Login to Reply Mad Hu Date: 5/14/2012 4:39:00 AM thank u Sirisha

Sirisha P Date: 5/14/2012 3:57:00 AM Ya its true "Never to give up a fight". Login to Reply