Mad Hu Poet Free verse

Fight For Life

People need to realize,

Never to give up a fight.

It is their birth right,

To live a better life.

A life full of love,

full of happiness.

A life full of vibrations,

Vibrations of the feel,

The feel which makes us sing,

The feel which makes us dance,

The feel which makes us alive.

Oh,how I wish.

I could make people realize,

Never to give up a fight.

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Keith Bickerstaffe July 8, 2012 at 9:40 PM Such an inspirational piece! Nicely composed and expressed, with fine rhyming and flow. BRAVO! Best wishes, Keith Mad Hu July 9, 2012 at 1:05 AM Thanks for posting yor comment:)

Tonya Turner July 6, 2012 at 12:03 PM Oh how I wish you could do that as well. Sometimes it's just easier to give up as sadly as that may be. Great write. Mad Hu July 9, 2012 at 1:02 AM true.Giving up is sad.Thanks for yor comment:)

Don Johnson June 14, 2012 at 2:56 AM ifn ya get down ...spring up like a young mountain goat, n go on... Mad Hu June 14, 2012 at 3:46 AM absolutely true and thanks for the comment

Dan Kearley June 8, 2012 at 9:53 PM Right on!.....So keep writing on! :o) Mad Hu June 14, 2012 at 3:47 AM thank you

Anne-Lise Andresen May 14, 2012 at 7:27 AM You are right in all your lines here in this poem Mad. Very well written, it is good! - oxox love from Anne-Lise (never give up!) Mad Hu May 14, 2012 at 9:10 PM Thanks Anne for such encouraging words.

Ravi Sathasivam May 14, 2012 at 5:20 AM Yes, I agree with you, never give up a fight. Nice poem and meaningful poem. Enjoyed. Mad Hu May 14, 2012 at 9:11 PM thanks for the comment

David Williams May 14, 2012 at 4:14 AM Mad, evocative words, thanks for your comments..David Mad Hu May 14, 2012 at 4:38 AM Thank you

Sirisha P May 14, 2012 at 4:05 AM Ya its true "Never to give up a fight". Mad Hu May 14, 2012 at 4:39 AM thank u Sirisha

Sirisha P May 14, 2012 at 3:57 AM Ya its true "Never to give up a fight".