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Fight Club

De'ron " The Cron" Issacs, In the best shape of his career, ripped, the world champion, through adversity he'd persevere. Never tasting defeat, king of the streets, beating the opposition, by the swiftness in his feet. Contorted facial meat, bruising body blow after body blow. Weak knees ensue, Darkness looms, "Cron" chants boom as he stands reputed. A reign of terror, De'Ron the undisputed Some notable victories: ** Christain "The Holocaust" Frost: K.O., 1:54 into the second round: Out matched, a bloody mess. Confused by DeRon's finesse. ** Kriss "The Kiss of Death" Seth: K.O., .58 seconds into the first round. Caught with a flying knee, surprised by the move of his former ally. ** Reese "Satans Seed" Reed: Submission, 3.24 into the fouth round. Brutal ground and pound, a monster!! Gave his back to be choked out. ** Byron "Iron Fisticuffs" Gruff K.O., 2:10 into the second round. Two broken ribs, he was revered. Disappeared, now lives recluse. Jared Pickett 3/2/2010 Asavvy1

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Date: 3/3/2010 2:36:00 PM
great poem about someone I 'd not heard of before! You write good, Jason. Hey, some guys are not getting it. My Little Room is a symbol of "writing in restricted form", such as sonnets. I write anywhere, on a bus, on a plane, in front of the tv! So my little room is not an actual place! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 3/3/2010 10:13:00 AM
Wow !!! Enjoyed reading what a great postign . I could not pull this one off. You got skills...LOVED your poem...
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Date: 3/3/2010 9:32:00 AM
Interesting write in this one. Not too much into fights.. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
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Date: 3/3/2010 8:41:00 AM
Hey, this is awesome, Jared! I really like the examples of fight outcomes listed at the end. Nice work! Love, carolyn
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Date: 3/3/2010 8:10:00 AM
So now u can FEEL me too! how wonderful is that ... my "honey poo" tells me that all the time ..he can FEEL me though 328 miles apart.. now that is some magnetic quality ... yes? .. glad u liked Flamboyant.. I had a special inspiration when I wrote it.. imagination is da bomb! .. hint hint hint.. luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/2/2010 4:09:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Jared. It was a pleasure to read. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/2/2010 12:55:00 PM
A great boxing lesson Mr. J.. so u are a "fight fan"?... great references ... to add to your poem... powerful words of descritpion to... special kinda poetry from a special poet.. and BTW..nice to see your Dad back .. sorry about his diagnosis ... will pray for him.. and also.. I LUV two Picketts back to back ..in comments ...of course...hehehe.. or NOT...luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/2/2010 11:59:00 AM
Unique and clever.
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Date: 3/2/2010 10:50:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading your emotions. I can hardly wait to read more! in answer to your question: I share my poetry with the world so I suppose so although I haven't introduced them to it in class, I suppose that they could find it.
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Date: 3/2/2010 10:30:00 AM
VERY INTERESTING, but good.I posted a poem for couplet on faith contest.Check it if you get a chance.
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Date: 3/2/2010 10:09:00 AM
I like this poem Jared. This is a good "MAN" poem! (If there is such a thing--) It is a very well written and a wonderful tribute. I like "...contorted facial meat..." Keep those great poems coming. Big Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/2/2010 9:17:00 AM
Nice one son I liked the newness in your style...Dad....Check your soup mail
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Date: 3/2/2010 5:39:00 AM
interesting mix
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Date: 3/2/2010 4:46:00 AM
As a child my father always had us watching boxing and wrestling on television. Your recounts of De'Ron are good.
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Date: 3/2/2010 12:23:00 AM
Thanks for encountering us with this Great"De"Ron"..career !enjoyed reading..Charma
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