Fifty Words

To celebrate aging to fifty,
A poet thought it would be nifty
	To jot down some verse;
	He wasn’t averse
To being, with words, rather thrifty.

Equipped with both paper and pen,
He struggled, again and again;
	He had little luck,
	Annoyingly stuck,
Then got it and yelled out Amen!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 9/11/2013 10:31:00 AM
I can't seem to find the words in my mind to tell you just what I think. That paper and pen is stuck once again and that's why this comment will stink. :)
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Date: 6/8/2012 8:35:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Ilene, with your "nifty fifty"! Love and Blessings,Rhonda
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Date: 6/8/2012 5:30:00 PM
Congrats, Ilene. Awesome. Great job. Thanks for your comments. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 6/8/2012 4:02:00 PM
Hye, u don't look a day past 25! This limerick isn't about dear Ilene, is it?...U have crafted an excellent limerick...A solid landing here too! Congrats and keep up the great work! Gwendolen
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Date: 6/8/2012 12:11:00 PM
This was quite nifty indeed! LOL Congratulations on your win ilene ...Samia
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Date: 6/8/2012 11:40:00 AM
Thrifty with words perhaps, but not thrifty with cleverness!! Great work!!
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Date: 6/8/2012 11:27:00 AM
Congratulations Ilene. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/8/2012 9:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your cute poem winning.
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Date: 6/8/2012 8:59:00 AM
I was amused by your poem ilene and it fitted with the focus of limerick for the week too.
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Date: 6/8/2012 6:27:00 AM
Congratulations Ilene xx
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Date: 6/8/2012 3:45:00 AM
Ilene, congrats on your teriffic win..David
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Date: 6/4/2012 11:20:00 AM
Andrea has said it all for me......marvellous work
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Date: 5/30/2012 10:44:00 PM
well, this is absolutely awesome that you could fashion two limericks from that word count. I am mad because the word counter of Soup is not saying correctly my number of words. I think I need to contact the judge and let him know before I post mine. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 5/30/2012 6:00:00 PM
Very clever! Terry
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Date: 5/30/2012 11:11:00 AM
A marvelous double LIMERICK! Impeccable rhyming and flow. You are the Queen of Meter!! Luv, Keith :)
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Date: 5/30/2012 10:19:00 AM
Ilene nice limericks, good luck..David
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