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FIFTY SHADES OF RED with Liam Mc Daid

FIFTY SHADES OF RED

She indulges in sensorial delights
Marked with the color of ecstacy
The passion she drinks is dilluted with eroticism
The moon melts with her gentle gaze
Honey drips from her luscious lips
Like ruby flames sweeping desert dust away
Oasis of churning lava explodes within her fiery spirit
 seducing the sun with her golden skin
Far away from Love's imprisonment
She builds her castle of desires
Imprinted with 
                  FIFTY~~~~~ SHADES OF~~~~~~RED~~~~~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/22/2016 11:24:00 AM
Well worth reading again. Hugs Rick.
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Red Fiery
Date: 5/22/2016 8:28:00 PM
Thank you for your kind visits~ Hugs~ Red
Date: 5/21/2016 3:14:00 PM
searing with flames lines.., great write with liam filled with embers of passiion, red!.. huggs
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Red Fiery
Date: 5/22/2016 8:31:00 PM
passion is what we all have specially as poets..I have read some of your romantic poems and they are marvelous !
Date: 5/17/2016 10:07:00 PM
You sure are passionate about red ... very sensual immersive writing. "The passion she drinks is diluted with eroticism" ... this particular line struck me, for typically passion and eroticism can be looked at as synonyms ... but with this we get something deeper. You're a real community poet with all these collaborations you've been doing ... well done to the both you!
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Red Fiery
Date: 5/22/2016 8:32:00 PM
Thank you for your lovely comment~ Cheers ~ Red
Date: 5/17/2016 8:56:00 PM
Amazing <3
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Red Fiery
Date: 5/22/2016 8:32:00 PM
Hugs ~ Red~
Date: 5/17/2016 1:09:00 PM
This is romantic and passionate; written seamlessly and leaving us with many shades of red to explore! Well done Red and Liam! // paul
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Red Fiery
Date: 5/22/2016 8:33:00 PM
Red is my fav and I can relate myself to this Color...what is your fav??? Hugs ~ red~
Date: 5/16/2016 8:07:00 AM
Another great collaboration, Red and Liam. Beautiful and sensual. A7. T.J
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Red Fiery
Date: 5/22/2016 8:34:00 PM
Thank you dear:)
Date: 5/16/2016 1:35:00 AM
I like your shade very much, Red Fiery, a wonderful collaboration. SKAT
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Red Fiery
Date: 5/22/2016 8:36:00 PM
Thank you dear :)
Date: 5/15/2016 5:56:00 PM
I would also like to thank everyone for the heartfelt beautiful comments wishing you all a blessing of a week filled with smiles
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Date: 5/15/2016 5:54:00 PM
Thank you red fiery it was a pleasure doing this with you dear friend wishing you a blessing of a week ahead
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Red Fiery
Date: 5/22/2016 8:38:00 PM
Thank you my dear..you are a sweet co-writer:))
Date: 5/15/2016 5:07:00 PM
Beautiful poem my lovely friend. Both have done well. A 7. Loved always, bl
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Date: 5/15/2016 8:45:00 AM
You are both on fire with this one! Hugs Rick.
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Red Fiery
Date: 5/22/2016 8:38:00 PM
* Blushing * Blushing *...that's how the color red is...On FIRE !!! Hugs ~ Red ~
Date: 5/15/2016 3:49:00 AM
Romanticism that melts the heart! Delightful collaboration of two wonderful poets. A seven to each dear friends, Read Fiery and Liam.
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Red Fiery
Date: 5/22/2016 8:39:00 PM
e??a??st? Demetrio...is this correct?? Hugs ~ Red ~
Date: 5/14/2016 3:00:00 PM
- A lovely poem, Red & Liam :) - (The passion she drinks is dilluted with erotism ... woow ) - hugs //Anne-Lise
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Red Fiery
Date: 5/14/2016 3:02:00 PM
Thank you my dear.. :)