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Fifty Shades of Red With Liam Mc Daid

FIFTY SHADES OF RED She indulges in sensorial delights Marked with the color of ecstacy The passion she drinks is dilluted with eroticism The moon melts with her gentle gaze Honey drips from her luscious lips Like ruby flames sweeping desert dust away Oasis of churning lava explodes within her fiery spirit seducing the sun with her golden skin Far away from Love's imprisonment She builds her castle of desires Imprinted with FIFTY~~~~~ SHADES OF~~~~~~RED~~~~~

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/22/2016 11:24:00 AM

Well worth reading again. Hugs Rick.

Red Fiery
Date: 5/22/2016 8:28:00 PM

Thank you for your kind visits~ Hugs~ Red

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/21/2016 3:14:00 PM

searing with flames lines.., great write with liam filled with embers of passiion, red!.. huggs

Red Fiery
Date: 5/22/2016 8:31:00 PM

passion is what we all have specially as poets..I have read some of your romantic poems and they are marvelous !

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/17/2016 10:07:00 PM

You sure are passionate about red ... very sensual immersive writing. "The passion she drinks is diluted with eroticism" ... this particular line struck me, for typically passion and eroticism can be looked at as synonyms ... but with this we get something deeper. You're a real community poet with all these collaborations you've been doing ... well done to the both you!

Red Fiery
Date: 5/22/2016 8:32:00 PM

Thank you for your lovely comment~ Cheers ~ Red