Red Fiery Poet Free verse

Fifty Shades of Red With Liam Mc Daid

FIFTY SHADES OF RED

She indulges in sensorial delights
Marked with the color of ecstacy
The passion she drinks is dilluted with eroticism
The moon melts with her gentle gaze
Honey drips from her luscious lips
Like ruby flames sweeping desert dust away
Oasis of churning lava explodes within her fiery spirit
 seducing the sun with her golden skin
Far away from Love's imprisonment
She builds her castle of desires
Imprinted with 
                  FIFTY~~~~~ SHADES OF~~~~~~RED~~~~~

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Richard Lamoureux May 22, 2016 at 11:24 AM Well worth reading again. Hugs Rick. Red Fiery May 22, 2016 at 8:28 PM Thank you for your kind visits~ Hugs~ Red

Nette Onclaud May 21, 2016 at 3:14 PM searing with flames lines.., great write with liam filled with embers of passiion, red!.. huggs Red Fiery May 22, 2016 at 8:31 PM passion is what we all have specially as poets..I have read some of your romantic poems and they are marvelous !

Timothy Hicks May 17, 2016 at 10:07 PM You sure are passionate about red ... very sensual immersive writing. "The passion she drinks is diluted with eroticism" ... this particular line struck me, for typically passion and eroticism can be looked at as synonyms ... but with this we get something deeper. You're a real community poet with all these collaborations you've been doing ... well done to the both you! Red Fiery May 22, 2016 at 8:32 PM Thank you for your lovely comment~ Cheers ~ Red

Toshia Hall May 17, 2016 at 8:56 PM Amazing <3 Red Fiery May 22, 2016 at 8:32 PM Hugs ~ Red~

Paul Callus May 17, 2016 at 1:09 PM This is romantic and passionate; written seamlessly and leaving us with many shades of red to explore! Well done Red and Liam! // paul Red Fiery May 22, 2016 at 8:33 PM Red is my fav and I can relate myself to this Color...what is your fav??? Hugs ~ red~

Skat A May 16, 2016 at 1:35 AM I like your shade very much, Red Fiery, a wonderful collaboration. SKAT Red Fiery May 22, 2016 at 8:36 PM Thank you dear :)

Liam Mcdaid May 15, 2016 at 5:56 PM I would also like to thank everyone for the heartfelt beautiful comments wishing you all a blessing of a week filled with smiles

Liam Mcdaid May 15, 2016 at 5:54 PM Thank you red fiery it was a pleasure doing this with you dear friend wishing you a blessing of a week ahead Red Fiery May 22, 2016 at 8:38 PM Thank you my dear..you are a sweet co-writer:))

Bl Devnath May 15, 2016 at 5:07 PM Beautiful poem my lovely friend. Both have done well. A 7. Loved always, bl

Richard Lamoureux May 15, 2016 at 8:45 AM You are both on fire with this one! Hugs Rick. Red Fiery May 22, 2016 at 8:38 PM * Blushing * Blushing *...that's how the color red is...On FIRE !!! Hugs ~ Red ~

Demetrios Trifiatis May 15, 2016 at 3:49 AM Romanticism that melts the heart! Delightful collaboration of two wonderful poets. A seven to each dear friends, Read Fiery and Liam. Red Fiery May 22, 2016 at 8:39 PM e??a??st? Demetrio...is this correct?? Hugs ~ Red ~

Anne-Lise Andresen May 14, 2016 at 3:00 PM - A lovely poem, Red & Liam :) - (The passion she drinks is dilluted with erotism ... woow ) - hugs //Anne-Lise Red Fiery May 14, 2016 at 3:02 PM Thank you my dear.. :)