Fiftieth Anniversary

jackolanturns grin atop rolls of dry fodder strains of music float all eyes watch the couple dance they see only each other ~//~ fine country setting whiffs of barbeque remain the chaffing dish warm old friends who now sipping wine reflect on their own journey ~//~ cake patiently waits two aged hands cut the first slice they sample with flare celebrating fifty years as each other’s only mate ~//~ quiet solitude the two gently reflecting when later alone yes, we have had a good life they exclaimed to each other ~//~ © Oct, 14 2010 For Amy's Tanka contest
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Dietrich Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 8:51 PM
i love how you made this an anniversary poem. Fall of their lives and all that jazz. This is awesome, Charles. Congrats on your win.
Kendrick Avatar
May 7, 2012 at 2:26 PM
Great work..Congrats on your win..Sara
Brown Avatar
May 7, 2012 at 12:32 PM
Congratulations on your win in the "Enchantment of Fall" contest Charles. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
October 14, 2010 at 10:09 AM
Congrats Charles to u and Carolyn on celebrating a lovely and momentous time... just like Bob Hinshaw and Vera his lovely wife.. so admirable to see longevity in couples on the soup..hope Ron and I follow up with such good examples in marriage and poetry luv..
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