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Fierce Raptors

The 
sun 
was 
shining,
when 
the 
raptors
flew 
across 
the 
sky.
As 
blue 
as 
water
in 
the 
carribean.
They 
flap 
and 
squawk.
As 
they 
were 
chasing
a 
white 
pigeon
to 
a 
mahogany 
tree.
They 
were 
hungry
Like 
a 
wolf.
And 
eager 
to 
grab 
it.
In 
certain 
might.
Helplessly 
it 
stood
on 
a 
branch.
Before 
the 
tugging 
and 
tearing,
the 
pigeon 
got 
a 
chance 
and 
escaped.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/27/2013 9:31:00 AM
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Date: 2/28/2013 5:11:00 AM
Ur welcome.

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