Fierce Love

A tremor,
a sudden shift,
like the earth beneath.
A hidden fire,
ignited swift.

Not gentle touch,
but a ripping sound,
a tearing through,
a force profound.

Not easy smiles,
but a desperate need,
a hunger deep,
a soul unfreed.

A raw, fierce thing,
not tame or mild,
a heart ablaze,
a burning child.

Not whispers soft,
but shouts unseen,
a violent love,
a love keen.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/9/2024 12:54:00 AM
Beautifully written! Passion all the way and fire! Love it!
Login to Reply
R P Avatar
Dr. Padmashree R P
Date: 10/13/2024 10:16:00 AM
Thanks Krish
Date: 10/8/2024 11:46:00 AM
Aswesome poem my dear poet friend, Dr. Padma. I love the rhyme flow of your poem. I think this goes well with rhyme instead of free verse. Your poem reminds me of how parent discipline their children many ages ago, but I don't think they're effective this new generation. A well-crafted poem which I greatly enjoyed this morning. Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Login to Reply
R P Avatar
Dr. Padmashree R P
Date: 10/8/2024 8:25:00 PM
Thanks, for such lovely words on my poem. Much honoured and appreciated by you Len.
Date: 10/7/2024 1:43:00 PM
Child needs help, it seems. Violence is never good. Your poem addresses a difficult situation. You did a good job of bringing this to light.
Login to Reply
R P Avatar
Dr. Padmashree R P
Date: 10/8/2024 8:26:00 PM
Thanks Hilda
Date: 10/7/2024 10:40:00 AM
Love your poem style
Login to Reply
R P Avatar
Dr. Padmashree R P
Date: 10/8/2024 8:26:00 PM
Thanks Jay Sir
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter