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Fierce Love

A tremor, a sudden shift, like the earth beneath. A hidden fire, ignited swift. Not gentle touch, but a ripping sound, a tearing through, a force profound. Not easy smiles, but a desperate need, a hunger deep, a soul unfreed. A raw, fierce thing, not tame or mild, a heart ablaze, a burning child. Not whispers soft, but shouts unseen, a violent love, a love keen.

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Date: 10/9/2024 12:54:00 AM
Beautifully written! Passion all the way and fire! Love it!
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Dr. Padmashree R P
Date: 10/13/2024 10:16:00 AM
Thanks Krish
Date: 10/8/2024 11:46:00 AM
Aswesome poem my dear poet friend, Dr. Padma. I love the rhyme flow of your poem. I think this goes well with rhyme instead of free verse. Your poem reminds me of how parent discipline their children many ages ago, but I don't think they're effective this new generation. A well-crafted poem which I greatly enjoyed this morning. Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
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Dr. Padmashree R P
Date: 10/8/2024 8:25:00 PM
Thanks, for such lovely words on my poem. Much honoured and appreciated by you Len.
Date: 10/7/2024 1:43:00 PM
Child needs help, it seems. Violence is never good. Your poem addresses a difficult situation. You did a good job of bringing this to light.
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Dr. Padmashree R P
Date: 10/8/2024 8:26:00 PM
Thanks Hilda
Date: 10/7/2024 10:40:00 AM
Love your poem style
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Dr. Padmashree R P
Date: 10/8/2024 8:26:00 PM
Thanks Jay Sir

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