Fierce Driving Force

My awe and fascinated find Lost deeply in a human mind. Its fancy fonts, not easy read, And yet it masterminds each deed. Incessant innovative source, Societies’ fierce driving force. The scope of knowledge, wide and vast, What minds grasp is designed to last. Dishonoured defaults of mankind Sit heavy on a human mind. Gloom, ecstatic joy and sorrows Hide in crevices and burrows. Its stoic strength, rare and unique, Exudes an aura of mystique. Motion and progress in its prime, Sparking the bright minds of all time. And never fails to fascinate - Mind’s lust for wit, insatiate. May 20, 2022
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Alex Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 11:39 PM
Coming back to congratulate you. Congratulations!
Peck Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 8:46 AM
A person's mind is what attracts and stays when beauty disappears. Your poem says it so well. Congratulations on your win!
Lillico  Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 1:33 PM
Thank you, Ann.
Agustin Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 12:05 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing what fascinates you through this fascinating muse of yours. God bless you.
Lillico  Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 1:33 PM
Thank you.
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 6:19 PM
Back to congratulate you on your podium win in Jeff’s Premiere Contest Margarita. This is a lovely poem my friend. Blessings xxoo
Lillico  Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 1:34 PM
Thank you.
Kyser Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 1:53 PM
Margarita - This was a “thoughtful” piece, and I really enjoyed it - I find our minds fascinating as well, consciousness, ingenuity, the good, the bad, and all arising from the combination of two cells! Congrats on a 3rd place and thanks so much for entering this piece!
Lillico  Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 1:34 PM
Thanks for an inspiration!
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 9:42 AM
A lovely winning poem Margarita. Congratulations on your 5th placement. Blessings xxoo
Alex Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 3:54 AM
A very beautiful rhyme. Congratulations!
Lillico  Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 1:35 PM
Thank you.
Leffanta Avatar
May 21, 2022 at 11:19 AM
Well thought and scribed! Enjoyed! Aloha!
Lillico  Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 1:35 PM
Thank you.
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