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Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Fields of Amber

Breeze blows calmly south
fields of amber grains swaying-
     summer sun stares down.

Copyright © Allen Beilschmidt Sr. | Year Posted 2019

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Caren Krutsinger

April 12, 2019 at 1:01 AM

Gorgeous! It feels like Nebraska in here, except I think they may be having snow right now.

April 11, 2019 at 5:05 PM

Ahhh!! We don't see many fields of wheat around here but they are beautiful when they have reached their maturity ready for harvest. Enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

April 11, 2019 at 5:35 PM

Thank you Sara

April 11, 2019 at 4:52 PM

i can feel summer's flame..lovely 'ku, allen..huggs

Mystic Rose Rose

April 11, 2019 at 4:14 PM

I want to get lost in those fields you describe. They sound ethereal and pretty. Thank you for sharing, hope you had a great day dear Allen.

April 11, 2019 at 1:11 PM

You paint a lovely captivating image in just three lines, Allen. Regards // paul

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

April 11, 2019 at 2:50 PM

Thank you Paul

April 11, 2019 at 9:15 AM

Great haiku Allen

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

April 11, 2019 at 8:32 AM

Thank you Eve

April 11, 2019 at 8:24 AM

You did capture the feeling and color you were looking for in this wonderful Haiku poem.Nicely done , Allen.

April 11, 2019 at 2:51 AM

Lovely image Allen, that summer sun can't come quick enough. Tom

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

April 11, 2019 at 8:32 AM

I agree Tom.

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