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Fields of Amber

Breeze blows calmly south fields of amber grains swaying- summer sun stares down.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 4/12/2019 1:01:00 AM
Gorgeous! It feels like Nebraska in here, except I think they may be having snow right now.
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Date: 4/11/2019 5:05:00 PM
Ahhh!! We don't see many fields of wheat around here but they are beautiful when they have reached their maturity ready for harvest. Enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for dropping by. Sara
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Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 4/11/2019 5:35:00 PM
Thank you Sara
Date: 4/11/2019 4:52:00 PM
i can feel summer's flame..lovely 'ku, allen..huggs
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Date: 4/11/2019 4:14:00 PM
I want to get lost in those fields you describe. They sound ethereal and pretty. Thank you for sharing, hope you had a great day dear Allen.
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Date: 4/11/2019 1:11:00 PM
You paint a lovely captivating image in just three lines, Allen. Regards // paul
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Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 4/11/2019 2:50:00 PM
Thank you Paul
Date: 4/11/2019 9:15:00 AM
Great haiku Allen
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Date: 4/11/2019 8:32:00 AM
Thank you Eve
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Date: 4/11/2019 8:24:00 AM
You did capture the feeling and color you were looking for in this wonderful Haiku poem.Nicely done , Allen.
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Date: 4/11/2019 2:51:00 AM
Lovely image Allen, that summer sun can't come quick enough. Tom
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Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 4/11/2019 8:32:00 AM
I agree Tom.

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