field of forgiveness

your field lies bare and vacant
a patch of wasteland never toiled
pardon not granted merciless and cold
a harvest of apology’s acceptance lost
in resentment anger fear and insecurity

seeds of opportunity thrown away
serving your own narrow narrative
change shrivels up for scraps
growth stunted and discarded
a memory extending past the moment

acrimonious feeling feeds fertile soil
in lack of kindness and compassion
love’s detritus bordering on hatred
serves victimhood and animosity
lacks courtesy respect forgiveness

it takes courage and emotional maturity
to receive amends in decency and grace
to grant remorse regrets concessions

I love you dearly my wayward child
yet when you refuse to consider
my wife and lover’s redress and plea
to normalize what had been tainted
you need to know I stand with her

while you cannot I do forgive you
may not accept your stubborn disregard
feel sadness disbelief and disappointment
for the prodigal acorn from my oak tree
therefore I pray for us and wish you well

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Date: 12/17/2024 9:44:00 AM
This is such a heartfelt and sincere poem, i felt the depth and firmness of your voice through your well articulated lines. Its important to always set boundaries and stand firm with decisions despite love and the bond between one another. The ending made my heart melt: and also how youv expressed love and forgiveness. Thank you for sharing. Congratulations on your win. Hope holidays treat you well: sending you light
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 1/28/2025 12:42:00 AM
Thank you very much for for kind reply and praise. Sending you loving wishes, Kai
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