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For Ink Empresses Field of Forgiveness contest

Is your soul black Like an acrobat Does heart flip Trip then crack Because you didn’t win Or maybe you lost a friend Could be you did sin Or have ways to mend There by the green tree Is forgiveness for you Forgiveness for me On either side love a blue sea Do you see denim destiny Letting go of the most dear things to esteem Rise above the tides Of life’s dilemma like bird Keep your eyes on the prize And in your heart winged word Forgiveness is the lightest load Be you small shy silent Or boisterous big bold Water your spirit holy soul Forgiveness is the way to do so

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Date: 12/17/2024 10:36:00 AM
Dear karen wise words so well woven in such a creative manner: I especially loved “ Rise above the tides Of life’s dilemma like bird” beautiful reminder and so much depth in your well woven words too; thank you for sharing. Congratulations on your placement. Sending you light always
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Karen Jones
Date: 12/17/2024 11:56:00 AM
Thanks dear Inky! You always have such inspiring words d great contest ideas!
Date: 11/29/2024 6:21:00 PM
Forgiveness does mend the heart Karen. It's as you say. I've found that I have lost all my anger and can focus on the present with much more clarity. It lets me fly! Smiles....you get it completely!
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Date: 11/29/2024 6:56:00 PM
Ah I love that for you and thanks for reading and sharing Duke!

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