Hello There Poet McWhirtle

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Fidgety Fingertips

Fidgety fingertips
tickling tempo and time,
modeling melody,
writing in rhythm and rhyme.

Frolicking fantasy -
magic in music sublime.
Perfectly pleasing performance;
cleverly crafting the climb.

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12/11/19
McWhirtle Me Poetry Contest
Sponsored by charles messina

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Jan Allison December 26, 2019 at 2:13 PM Beautifully crafted and I love the alliteration, Many congratulations on your win, I hope you had a wonderful Christmas:-) hugs Jan xx Hello There December 26, 2019 at 6:17 PM Thank you so much, Jan! I'm happy you enjoyed this! :) Ours was beautiful, and I hope you enjoy the rest of this holiday season as well :) hugs <3

Chris Green December 26, 2019 at 7:39 AM Congrats my friend on your placement in the contest. It was well deserved for this fantastic poem. Hello There December 26, 2019 at 6:16 PM Thank you so much, Chris :) It was an interesting challenge, especially trying to use the proper rhythm :)

Charles Messina December 24, 2019 at 9:39 AM I love this, HT. Awesome write with some great word play. Congratulations on your win and Happy Holidays to you and your family. -Charlie Hello There December 26, 2019 at 6:15 PM Thank you so much, Charlie, for the cool challenge and placement :) Happiest Holiday to you as well and all of your loved ones!! <3

Caren Krutsinger December 14, 2019 at 3:55 AM I love frolicking! This poem frolicks! Hello There December 14, 2019 at 8:41 AM Lol. Thank you, Caren! :)

Chris Green December 12, 2019 at 7:12 AM Being a guitar player this one really spoke to me. I love this form and how you crafted your words to fit it perfectly. There is a soft melody that accompanies this piece as if a tune playing in the mind that you just can't help but hum. Nicely done my friend. Hello There December 12, 2019 at 2:44 PM Aw, thanks, Chris ~ I'm so glad you enjoyed this piece and could relate so well :) An interesting form, for sure, but a fun challenge ;)

Sandra Adams December 12, 2019 at 5:03 AM This one just flows along so smoothly very well crafted and sure to be a winner. Wonderful write :) hugs Hello There December 12, 2019 at 2:42 PM Thank you so much, Sandy ~ I really appreciate your wonderful feedback :) hugs

Winged Warrior December 11, 2019 at 8:28 PM An abundance of alluring alliteration...a super fav my friend...ta ta ^WW^ :o) Hello There December 12, 2019 at 12:57 AM Fly away now, ^WW^ ;) Hope to see you again soon, and thank you so much for the honor of a 'super' fav and a friendly visit :)

Vijay Pandit December 11, 2019 at 5:12 PM Cadence of your poem is so very beautiful--a superb write, HT. A sure win this is. Hello There December 11, 2019 at 7:40 PM Thank you, Vijay, for your vote of confidence and compliments :)

Na Na December 11, 2019 at 5:03 PM Nicely done H.T. best of luck in the contest. Hello There December 11, 2019 at 7:34 PM Thank you so much, Gregory! :)