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Fidelity Strokes

When one opts to be disloyal Eyes casts constant betrayal. If caught being blatant criminal Admit your act devoid denial. 27-7=20 20 Placed 4th in the contest. Note:Four lines poetry Contest. Sponsored by Constance La France~A Dear heart.

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Constance La France

Date: 7/29/2020 5:27:00 PM

Deepa, congratulations on your win in my 4 line contest _Constance

V. Deepa
Date: 7/30/2020 11:04:00 AM

Thankyou Constance mam for your support,motivation and encouragement:-)Keep inspiring. Take care.Much love:-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/29/2020 1:44:00 PM

Nice seeing this one on the winner list today. Congrats for your win

V. Deepa
Date: 7/30/2020 11:02:00 AM

Hello Andrea mam, Thankyou for constant support and encouragement:-)I feel delighted by your visits:-)Best wishes for you too.Take care.With love~Deepa:-)

Sigrid Ermine

Date: 7/28/2020 3:12:00 PM

Very sage lines. Good content for this contest. You may choose to add an 's' to 'opt'. Nicely expressed for compact form.

V. Deepa
Date: 7/29/2020 3:43:00 AM

Oh thanks for your kind visit and lovely appreciation sir:-) Yes, I had deliberately done that.Anyways will repair it now:-) Best wishes for you too.Keep writing and keep inspiring.Take care.Warm regards~Deepa:-)

Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/28/2020 1:35:00 PM

Ah! Words of sheer wisdom and honour from your pen Deepa. Loved this one. Congratulations on your win! :)

V. Deepa
Date: 7/29/2020 3:21:00 AM

I am delighted by your wonderful encouraging words of appreciation dear Aditi mam.Am pleased to know that you loved it.:-)Take care.Much love.:-)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/28/2020 1:06:00 PM

Well said, Deepa--congrats on your win!

V. Deepa
Date: 7/29/2020 3:18:00 AM

Hello Vijay sir, Thanks a bunch for appreciating my words sir.:-) Best wishes for you too. Have a lovely day.Warmest regards.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/28/2020 2:49:00 AM

- Four great lines, Deepa ... congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

V. Deepa
Date: 7/29/2020 3:16:00 AM

Hello anne mam, Thankyou for your short & beautiful appreciation:-) Have a wonderful day.Much love:-)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 7/27/2020 7:19:00 AM

This brings to mind “honour” and “respect”, admitting your wrongs being honourable and deserving of respect; facing being human. Lovely done! My best to you in the contest, xomo

V. Deepa
Date: 7/27/2020 11:57:00 AM

Yes, your absolutely right Mo mam. Thankyou for the great review:-) At times though people accept their mistakes honour, self- respect , whatever .. cannot be retained:-)However, need to face once they've commited any sin. Thanks for the appreciation,love and wishes too:-) Have a wonderful day.Much love