Kim Rodrigues Poet Footle

Fiddling with Footles March 2025

Apples in Fall
socks warm
worn fruit

Crystal Light
small bows
sans rain

Newly Born
unmasked
this form

Lettuce Sleep
tossed,turned
sans dreams

Justice
roulette
made choice

Mercy
“Uncle”
repent

Grace
desserts
just ‘cause

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Paige Hind March 13, 2025 at 11:23 PM I like this. It's very clever! Kim Rodrigues April 17, 2025 at 7:29 PM Thank you so much!

Andrea Dietrich March 9, 2025 at 3:42 PM Some of these with word play were sterling! Kim Rodrigues March 9, 2025 at 5:28 PM Thank you, Andrea! :)

Joseph P. DiMino March 7, 2025 at 8:42 AM "Grace desserts just ‘cause" -- anything dessert gets my attention! Very creative. Kim Rodrigues March 7, 2025 at 12:59 PM Thank you, Joe!

Yann Rolland March 7, 2025 at 7:47 AM just delicious, i love the justice matte, and the creativity, nicely done poet Kim Rodrigues March 7, 2025 at 12:59 PM Thank you, Yann!

Tom Cunningham March 6, 2025 at 10:41 PM You're on a roll Kim, so addictive once you get going. Tom Kim Rodrigues March 7, 2025 at 6:36 AM Thank you, Tom! Yes…

Gershon Wolf March 6, 2025 at 8:43 PM 'Lettuce Sleep' tickles my funnybone, Kim. Thanks. ~ gw Kim Rodrigues March 7, 2025 at 6:36 AM LOL…thank you! Glad you liked that one!

Sara Kendrick March 6, 2025 at 2:25 PM I like the ending which gave me a chuckle, Kim. I understand the sleep ones. I had a hard time with sleep last night. I hope tonight is better. There was some nice wind ringing the windchimes and I was snuzzled-in, but sleep was evading my presence. Sara K Kim Rodrigues March 6, 2025 at 5:26 PM Happens to me sometimes. Hope you get some rest tonight! Glad the ending gave you a chuckle!