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Fiddling with Footles March 2025

Apples in Fall socks warm worn fruit Crystal Light small bows sans rain Newly Born unmasked this form Lettuce Sleep tossed,turned sans dreams Justice roulette made choice Mercy “Uncle” repent Grace desserts just ‘cause

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Paige Hind

Date: 3/13/2025 11:23:00 PM

I like this. It's very clever!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/17/2025 7:29:00 PM

Thank you so much!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/9/2025 3:42:00 PM

Some of these with word play were sterling!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/9/2025 5:28:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea! :)

Joe Dimino

Date: 3/7/2025 8:42:00 AM

"Grace desserts just ‘cause" -- anything dessert gets my attention! Very creative.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/7/2025 12:59:00 PM

Thank you, Joe!

Yann Rolland

Date: 3/7/2025 7:47:00 AM

just delicious, i love the justice matte, and the creativity, nicely done poet

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/7/2025 12:59:00 PM

Thank you, Yann!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/6/2025 10:41:00 PM

You're on a roll Kim, so addictive once you get going. Tom

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/7/2025 6:36:00 AM

Thank you, Tom! Yes…

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/6/2025 8:43:00 PM

'Lettuce Sleep' tickles my funnybone, Kim. Thanks. ~ gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/7/2025 6:36:00 AM

LOL…thank you! Glad you liked that one!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/6/2025 2:25:00 PM

I like the ending which gave me a chuckle, Kim. I understand the sleep ones. I had a hard time with sleep last night. I hope tonight is better. There was some nice wind ringing the windchimes and I was snuzzled-in, but sleep was evading my presence. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/6/2025 5:26:00 PM

Happens to me sometimes. Hope you get some rest tonight! Glad the ending gave you a chuckle!