Faye Gibson Poet Rispetto

Fickle Sun

Fickle sun with watery eyes
low upon the horizon lies
hanging his boots over the side
of our soggy, rain weary world.
Disrespectful, his pipe smoke curled
around dripping mountains, blue dyed;
fickle sun with watery eyes
low upon the horizon lies.

My cute rain boots are filled with frogs!
The sun should shine! Old pedagogue
hanging his boots over the side,
over dripping mountains, blue dyed;
fickle sun with watery eyes
low upon the horizon lies.

Faye Lanham Gibson
Copyright, October 11, 2014

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Andrea Dietrich November 6, 2014 at 10:26 PM Probably the most imaginative one i have seen on this list. Congrats, Faye. I love it.

Brenda Meier-Hans November 6, 2014 at 3:08 PM I love this Faye. It's fun and has the magical Faye pen. Congratulations on your win.

Jan Allison November 6, 2014 at 12:31 PM lovely imagery Faye many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Kayod5 Kayode November 6, 2014 at 7:02 AM A good one from nature´s art,congrats Faye

Dr.Ram Mehta November 6, 2014 at 4:19 AM Thanks for the entry and congrats on the win, Faye

Dorian Petersen Potter October 11, 2014 at 1:57 PM This is a Sonetina Rispetto Faye! ;) I liked it! Thank you my friend for using my poetry form. Well done! Cheers! xxxx D.