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Fickle Sun

Fickle sun with watery eyes low upon the horizon lies hanging his boots over the side of our soggy, rain weary world. Disrespectful, his pipe smoke curled around dripping mountains, blue dyed; fickle sun with watery eyes low upon the horizon lies. My cute rain boots are filled with frogs! The sun should shine! Old pedagogue hanging his boots over the side, over dripping mountains, blue dyed; fickle sun with watery eyes low upon the horizon lies. Faye Lanham Gibson Copyright, October 11, 2014

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Date: 11/6/2014 10:26:00 PM
Probably the most imaginative one i have seen on this list. Congrats, Faye. I love it.
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Date: 11/6/2014 3:08:00 PM
I love this Faye. It's fun and has the magical Faye pen. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/6/2014 12:31:00 PM
lovely imagery Faye many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/6/2014 7:02:00 AM
A good one from nature´s art,congrats Faye
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Date: 11/6/2014 4:19:00 AM
Thanks for the entry and congrats on the win, Faye
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Date: 10/11/2014 1:57:00 PM
This is a Sonetina Rispetto Faye! ;) I liked it! Thank you my friend for using my poetry form. Well done! Cheers! xxxx D.
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