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Feverish Footle Pity Plea

Some bug Got snug Got germed (Infirmed) I moan I groan Poor me (Agree?)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/5/2013 10:36:00 PM
I love it when poetry makes me laugh and smile. Mission accomplished! Loved these Tim.
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Date: 8/31/2013 12:06:00 PM
Strange but it definately works... Fun read.
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Date: 8/29/2013 11:36:00 PM
Nice play of words with meaning
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Date: 8/29/2013 9:47:00 PM
Lol agree your 2 funny:)
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Date: 8/29/2013 7:12:00 PM
hmmmm LOL I like you long Cajun poems cher gimme a new one? Yup Villanelle LOL I found it eaiser because of the repeated line! [Sara guessed!] How have you been? L ight & Love
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Date: 8/29/2013 7:01:00 PM
hope you are not really sick or that you are on the mend!!!!!.....cute poem Tim.....
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Date: 8/29/2013 6:51:00 PM
Awwww, the poor boy be sickies then? I wish I could kiss it better and chase the nasties on their way. No mind. Licia :-)
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Date: 8/29/2013 6:04:00 PM
I sure hope these footless are fiction! They are very good, though! Love, Kim
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Date: 8/29/2013 5:21:00 PM
ha I agree... hope you are not sick... enjoyed this.... Linda
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Date: 8/29/2013 2:56:00 PM
Pity plea pity party!! I think it is GREAT.
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Date: 8/29/2013 1:17:00 PM
Ha! Sure! This was cool. Nicely done!
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