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Feverish Footle Pity Plea

Some bug
Got snug

Got germed
(Infirmed)

I moan
I groan

Poor me
(Agree?)

Copyright © Tim Ryerson | Year Posted 2013

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Connie Marcum Wong

September 5, 2013 at 10:36 PM

I love it when poetry makes me laugh and smile. Mission accomplished! Loved these Tim.

August 31, 2013 at 12:06 PM

Strange but it definately works... Fun read.

August 29, 2013 at 11:36 PM

Nice play of words with meaning

August 29, 2013 at 9:47 PM

Lol agree your 2 funny:)

August 29, 2013 at 7:12 PM

hmmmm LOL I like you long Cajun poems cher gimme a new one? Yup Villanelle LOL I found it eaiser because of the repeated line! [Sara guessed!] How have you been? L ight & Love

August 29, 2013 at 7:01 PM

hope you are not really sick or that you are on the mend!!!!!.....cute poem Tim.....

Delysia Hendricks

August 29, 2013 at 6:51 PM

Awwww, the poor boy be sickies then? I wish I could kiss it better and chase the nasties on their way. No mind. Licia :-)

August 29, 2013 at 6:04 PM

I sure hope these footless are fiction! They are very good, though! Love, Kim

Poet Destroyer A

August 29, 2013 at 5:21 PM

ha I agree... hope you are not sick... enjoyed this.... Linda

Andrea Dietrich

August 29, 2013 at 2:56 PM

Pity plea pity party!! I think it is GREAT.

August 29, 2013 at 1:17 PM

Ha! Sure! This was cool. Nicely done!

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