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Feuillemort

Feuillemort For you're the one who makes me spring and grow In a beautiful vernal equinox When winter came, said thee "I have to go" In almost nirvana, thee became flux As seasons changed, I waited in pure vain Retrouvaille someday, in cockaigne of ours Overmorrow, season of growth again O God, asking to reconnect lost stars Growth and beauty have passed in a half week I'm now a shade darker, color no more Yes, the days have made me totally meek Bring me back to the days with her afore Regain, rebirth, relive me for I cry Ne'er feuillemort, but when green was I. COMPOSED OF: 3 QUATRAINS AND A RHYMING COUPLET FORM: SHAKESPEAREAN SONNET (also known as ELIZABETHAN SONNET) NUMBER OF LINES: 14 SYLLABLES COUNT: 10 PATTERN: ABAB CDCD EFEF GG

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Date: 7/9/2016 5:17:00 AM
Congrats Hans, for having your wonderful piece featured in the Poetry Soup homepage!! ;-)
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Date: 1/28/2016 9:53:00 PM
Hansteven Selfa, nice to see this one on the winning list. LINDA
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Date: 1/22/2016 1:55:00 AM
Wonder why it got screwed up earlier.. congrats on big win Hansteven.
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Date: 1/20/2016 8:27:00 AM
Hansteven, Congrats on your win. SKAT **
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Date: 11/21/2015 12:04:00 PM
Hi Hansteven, a wonderful sonnet. Beautiful and deep imagery. Love LINDA
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Date: 11/22/2015 12:27:00 AM
Thank you. I'm so pleased that you liked my sonnet. :)

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