Janice Canerdy Poet Pleiades

Feud--2

Fiery, vicious, ire-filled dispute
Ferocious, savage, shocking fight
Flagrant show of hate so acute
Frightful, vitriolic blight

Forgoes any chances to mend
Forsakes God's command: Let hate end.
Fails to deal with furor's root.



June 4, 2018, entered in Joseph May's Pleiades Contest

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Al Juman July 4, 2018 at 12:00 PM beautifully composed--Very nice Janice Canerdy July 4, 2018 at 3:58 PM Thanks so much, Al! Janice

Susan Gentry June 24, 2018 at 7:48 PM Congratulations on your win! Well done. Janice Canerdy June 24, 2018 at 8:53 PM Thanks so much, Susan! Janice

Roy Pett June 24, 2018 at 5:11 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win Janice, so well written. :)) Janice Canerdy June 24, 2018 at 12:47 PM Thank you so much, Roy! Janice

Agnes Krampe June 23, 2018 at 10:13 AM The many f-sounds lend your poem a fitting ferocious tone . congratulations on your win Janice Canerdy June 23, 2018 at 8:46 PM Thanks so much, Agnes! Janice

Probir Gupta June 23, 2018 at 12:06 AM Nicely said, 'Let this end' ... Congratulations, Janice ... Janice Canerdy June 23, 2018 at 7:01 AM Thanks so much, Probir! Janice

Joseph May June 22, 2018 at 4:30 PM Those feuds never seem to end!..Congrats on your win Janice.. Janice Canerdy June 23, 2018 at 7:02 AM Thanks so much, Joseph, for sponsoring the contest and for placing my poem!! Janice

Andrea Dietrich June 22, 2018 at 4:18 PM Hey, you got a TOP WIN. Congrats for you, my friend!!! well deserved. Janice Canerdy June 23, 2018 at 7:03 AM Thanks so much, Andrea! Janice

Andrea Dietrich June 8, 2018 at 7:54 PM Janice, I found a poem I was waiting to give her but had never posted. I am gonna post it later for THIS plieades contest!! Janice Canerdy June 8, 2018 at 8:39 PM Good idea. I've done the same thing--or revised one for a contest. Actually, I'm revising one right now and thinking I could have written one or two new ones by now! Janice

Andrea Dietrich June 5, 2018 at 6:11 PM well done!! Do you remember the lady giving us contests on this form. She was halfway through the alphabet and then just stopped!!! Janice Canerdy June 5, 2018 at 6:13 PM Thanks so much, Andrea. Yes, I was enjoying her contests! Janice

Kim Rodrigues June 5, 2018 at 3:48 PM Nicely done, Janice! Best end the feud quickly before it gets out of hand! Janice Canerdy June 5, 2018 at 4:03 PM That's right! Thanks, Kim. Janice

Arturo Michael June 5, 2018 at 5:36 AM It's a battle to the end...pure wickedness... A powerful write...All the best Janice Janice Canerdy June 5, 2018 at 8:13 AM Thanks so much, Arturo. Janice