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Fervid Refinery

Licking flames 
Rage...
Heat penetrates,

Ashes smolder...
Purified stone
Emerges.

firefree verse

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Sara Kendrick

April 14, 2014 at 7:44 AM

Great winning work..I wonder what stone that would be...Congrats on your win..Sara

Aiyah Torres

April 14, 2014 at 6:59 AM

awesome take in 10 words poem!! Congratulations, Nicole!! :O))

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

April 14, 2014 at 6:43 AM

what a golden write.. :) creative write.. :) CONGRATULATIONS.. :) =OLIVE_ELOI

Dr.Ram Mehta

April 14, 2014 at 1:08 AM

brilliant take on the theme of stones. congrats on a fine win, nicole

Skat A

April 13, 2014 at 8:20 PM

Awesome 10 words, SKAT

Andrea Dietrich

April 13, 2014 at 4:25 PM

Lots of descriptive images you got into this one, which Nette loves. Congrats on a great win.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

April 13, 2014 at 2:15 PM

Wow great ! Pure stones !! Liked very much Nicole ! Congrats on great win !!

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 13, 2014 at 1:08 PM

- A poem about STONES in just 10 words - not easy - but it was a lot of good poems nevertheless - Congratulations on your winning poem, Nicole !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)