Fervently

Don’t be so flippant my weird teacher said
Trying to scold me with 
A nasty glare

I was entranced!  A vocabulary word
To learn!   Hooray!
Me myself and I loved a new word.

That night scanning the dictionary I captured other words:  
Feather-like
Figuratively 
And 
Finance 

I so fervently wanted to impress 
My teacher so I used 
Them all like a real nerd.

I used free-based, fervent, Fritz 
and farce on Wednesday
A day she cut me from the herd.

She’s way too smart the teacher said.  
I know how to dumb students down; but I have 
No teaching skills that smarten one up.

So I moved up to 2nd grade.
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Wolf Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 5:32 PM
Education "at its finest" - 'no skills to smarten them up:' Way to clobber the American school system, Caren. It needs lots and lots more clobbering, by the way. Thanks, gw
Krutsinger Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 6:50 PM
I clobber away when I have to, you know me. Have machete, will hack, have meat tenderizer, will clobber.
Bauer Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 3:30 PM
i hope this is true and if it is, GOOD FOR YOU! i love this story, caren...
Krutsinger Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 12:24 AM
Totally false, but based on one of my daughters who could have skipped a grade, but it was "up to the teacher", and the teacher said "no" even thought she had already read every book in the library and The Mammoth Hunters which was on her 3rd grade teacher's desk.
Chakrabarty Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 12:19 PM
real grind studying Fs..enjoyed. Love.
Krutsinger Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 12:24 AM
Thank you, Rajat. I am so glad you visited! I feel honored.
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