Fertile Crescent, I

Fertile Crescent
The feeling of the sun, overshadowing
My morality, my righteousness
That sun over my left should,
Threatening to tinge me if
I pontificate platitudes that
Fail to connect me to a
Full stomach for my baby,
Solid comfort during my elders’ aging
And respite needs
 
That McChrystal was sacrificed at the altar,
The way Abraham (*pause) to show faith
O yea, my ancient ancestors from Ireland
Maybe they had roots in Celtic lore 
Heralding Beowulf’s heroics
And maybe they had someone in some way connected
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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September 10, 2013 at 10:37 AM
ha ha ha I love your comment on my Alice poem :-)... please post another poem ;-) Linda
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September 10, 2013 at 2:12 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Jen ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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September 13, 2013 at 5:05 PM
Thanks for your warm welcome. I enjoy your poetry :)
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September 9, 2013 at 8:55 PM
Jen, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* Skat * ...
Franks Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 5:06 PM
Thanks for writing to welcome me. I hope you write often and that you are patient while I learn how this site works!
A   Avatar
September 9, 2013 at 5:09 PM
An epic write Jen, thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Franks Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 5:07 PM
It is requiring the research of an epic, that's for sure! Thanks for your warm welcome and comments, I can't wait to read your work!
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