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Ferry Poem

I'm writing this poem on the ferry. How much do I like this? Well, very! The water, when smooth, Does nothing but soothe And my stress I am able to bury. Though sometimes the river is choppy; My handwritten words come out sloppy. But still, I can write; On my desktop, tonight, I will print out a neatened-up copy.

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Date: 5/6/2019 11:53:00 AM
That's cute Ilene. Trevor
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Date: 5/4/2019 5:20:00 PM
Simple perfection of rhyme. Love how the first stanza was so smooth. And the second a bit staccato.
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Date: 5/4/2019 2:01:00 PM
Just reading this and my wife starts talking about going on a cruise lol
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Date: 5/3/2019 2:35:00 PM
what a fun poem Ilene. i write anytime anyplace anywhere when the muse hits but on my last ferry crossing to the Uk it was so rough I just tried to sleep and ignore the vomit bags that were being given out - I better write a poem about that lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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