Ferry Interesting

“I wish the ferry had a fairy,” said Phoebe with a frown
to no one in particular (but everyone remembered later on).
That’s a strange thing to say on an excursion in Year 5,
especially when the teachers are around.

Eating hot chips on the seat just up from me,
a skinny man avoids my longing stare (Those chips of his, I wish were mine).
I hear a funny squawk. It isn’t me -
Chip-wishing seagulls probably, somewhere (I probably shouldn’t stare).

I cool my wishful eyes in harbour waves of green. 
(The shore has nothing interesting to see –
No animals, I mean. Look -
Just - more - green.)

I hear a funny squawk. It’s under me!
No, it’s not a fairy penguin (as you may have been expecting).
“It’s  a chook!” I scream…
…I scream = ice-cream…mmm…
I close my eyes and dream,
open one eye, have a sneaky look…It’s still a chook.
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Date: 1/12/2024 8:35:00 PM
Clever and very creative wordplay throughout this. I really love the ice cream line and also how you’ve started and how descriptive your poem is, especially “ I hear a funny squawk. It isn’t me - Chip-wishing seagulls probably, somewhere (I probably shouldn’t stare).“ made me smile too! Hah! Brilliant write this is! Pleasure reading your work. Sending you light always
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Jeanette Swan
Date: 1/12/2024 8:47:00 PM
Thank you for those kind words. This started as a news article (some time ago), about a stowaway hen on a ferry.
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