Notes About The Poem

THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FREED VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment

Ferocity a Freed Verse

FEROCITY
bastion
slowly
 being opened
secret
for years
elegance
ushered in
towering
  over
a ferocious
scene
silencing
the
 excitable
 with
a watchful gaze
 beneath
 in front
&angular

so distinguished
 looking
faces
with
closed
ears
glimpsed
in aversion
 displayed
readily
 & not  accessible
 but
 completely
free
to
drawing
compelling
attention
 to the
outraged
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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