Ferocity a Freed Verse

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THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FREED VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment

FEROCITY bastion slowly being opened secret for years elegance ushered in towering over a ferocious scene silencing the excitable with a watchful gaze beneath in front &angular so distinguished looking faces with closed ears glimpsed in aversion displayed readily & not accessible but completely free to drawing compelling attention to the outraged

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