Ferocity a Freed Verse
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THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FREED VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment
FEROCITY
bastion
slowly
being opened
secret
for years
elegance
ushered in
towering
over
a ferocious
scene
silencing
the
excitable
with
a watchful gaze
beneath
in front
&angular
so distinguished
looking
faces
with
closed
ears
glimpsed
in aversion
displayed
readily
& not accessible
but
completely
free
to
drawing
compelling
attention
to the
outraged
Copyright © Brian Strand | Year Posted 2023
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