Fermented Rice

Sake in my hand....
just name your fovorite brand
we'll both try to stand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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February 23, 2011 at 12:53 AM
Hey be careful while trying to stand!Enjoyed----kashinath
Dietrich Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 11:35 PM
Cute one on sake!!
Pettit Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 6:19 PM
I've always liked sake. My late father and I made a homemade batch of it years ago. Nice senryu here. The fourth word in the second line is misspelled: it's "favorite".
Richards Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 5:57 PM
Love it!! That last line is a hoot!! :)
Mehta Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 5:46 PM
Very witty and cute, Robb
Nutter Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 12:24 PM
Nice senryu enjoyed the thought.
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February 22, 2011 at 12:16 PM
HA! Awesome Robb!
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February 22, 2011 at 12:07 PM
Only had sake once, Robb, at a Japanese restaurant. It tasted good, but they didn't serve it chillded. Enjoyed the humor! Best wishes, Carolyn
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