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Sake in my hand.... just name your fovorite brand we'll both try to stand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/23/2011 12:53:00 AM
Hey be careful while trying to stand!Enjoyed----kashinath
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Date: 2/22/2011 11:35:00 PM
Cute one on sake!!
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Date: 2/22/2011 6:19:00 PM
I've always liked sake. My late father and I made a homemade batch of it years ago. Nice senryu here. The fourth word in the second line is misspelled: it's "favorite".
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Date: 2/22/2011 5:57:00 PM
Love it!! That last line is a hoot!! :)
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Date: 2/22/2011 5:46:00 PM
Very witty and cute, Robb
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Date: 2/22/2011 12:24:00 PM
Nice senryu enjoyed the thought.
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Date: 2/22/2011 12:16:00 PM
HA! Awesome Robb!
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Date: 2/22/2011 12:07:00 PM
Only had sake once, Robb, at a Japanese restaurant. It tasted good, but they didn't serve it chillded. Enjoyed the humor! Best wishes, Carolyn
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