Feral Forest Haiku

tangerine morning

in a flame feral forest

deer dash, squirrels leap
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
January 1, 2011 at 12:47 AM
Aha, here is one i had seen before. So I HAD read one of your poems before Charles told me about you! Nice to meet you. When I see someone posting lots of really short poems, I often just like to spend time reading them all. Next time I will try to get to your others! Luv,Andrea
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December 31, 2010 at 10:05 AM
Hello Eiken, ' This is a wonderful Haiku, in fact I think one of your best! Love it............. Happy New Year Eiken As Always, Shar
Mehta Avatar
December 31, 2010 at 4:56 AM
Great images with alliteration , nice haiku, Eiken, happy new year with this great haiku
Dietrich Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 9:35 PM
Cool images of this feral forest, Eiken. LUv, andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 8:08 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup Eiken.. I usually do this greeting to all new poets but with the holidays have fallen behind so enjoy all the features soup has to offer and have fun with luv..
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December 30, 2010 at 6:46 PM
Bright and vivid Eiken and full of great imagery with vibrant lines..enjoyed with luv.. your lovely Haiku...
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