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Feral Forest Haiku

tangerine morning in a flame feral forest deer dash, squirrels leap

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/1/2011 12:47:00 AM

Aha, here is one i had seen before. So I HAD read one of your poems before Charles told me about you! Nice to meet you. When I see someone posting lots of really short poems, I often just like to spend time reading them all. Next time I will try to get to your others! Luv,Andrea

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 12/31/2010 10:05:00 AM

Hello Eiken, ' This is a wonderful Haiku, in fact I think one of your best! Love it............. Happy New Year Eiken As Always, Shar

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/31/2010 4:56:00 AM

Great images with alliteration , nice haiku, Eiken, happy new year with this great haiku

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/30/2010 9:35:00 PM

Cool images of this feral forest, Eiken. LUv, andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/30/2010 8:08:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup Eiken.. I usually do this greeting to all new poets but with the holidays have fallen behind so enjoy all the features soup has to offer and have fun with luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/30/2010 6:46:00 PM

Bright and vivid Eiken and full of great imagery with vibrant lines..enjoyed with luv.. your lovely Haiku...