Feral Beyond Comprehension

He was untamed by human nature,
wild as a lion and fierce as a wolf.
Not carrying any instinct other than 
intense cruelty,
he kept his brutality for safekeeping. 

Like an undomesticated cat he roamed
the streets at night searching for what
seemed to be his prey. 
Like a chameleon during the day he
seemed like a soul searching for
redemption,
but that was always his weak style. 

He thought strength was found in
words spoken out of disrespect. 
Antagonized women for pleasure 
hoping he would find one to take
home without mercy. 

Seeking something out of life
other than affection he made 
connections with the only ones
in mankind that were savage and
fearless. 

Violence was the only way he 
knew how to interact with others
and the rage in his essence seemed
so sadistic he didn’t love even
if he could.

His youth was a sad one to say
the least. 
Never was taught the difference
between righteousness and 
wrong transgressions. 
So he grew to be a man filled 
with a temperament of disregard
for the safety of those around him. 

One night feeling invincible he 
strolled once again with too much
pride. 
Encountered a woman from his past 
that he treated with misconduct. 

                   He was never found again. 


Feral Contest
August 6, 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 8/12/2018 6:55:00 PM
Oh I like this! Creative, different, dark. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 8/11/2018 8:36:00 AM
oh I see ! Love the ending, Laura. Congrats on your win with this charming poem.
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Date: 8/10/2018 3:11:00 PM
A very dark take on the 'feral' theme, Laura, and very well-written. Congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/7/2018 2:43:00 AM
I was thinking this is pretty dark, dangerously dark, I am shocked by this and then the ending made everything right, and brought me an insane happiness. Wow! I am loving this poem, Laura.
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