Fences

Hard to figure out When looking at a new fence, What the intent was. Did the builder want to keep something in Or perhaps keep something out.. Maybe it was both.
Barbara Gorelick senryu/kimo for " A Mesh of Forms" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 6:35 PM
Hey, this is really cool how you did yours. I really like it. Two forms that fit together like hand and glove.
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March 12, 2012 at 7:36 PM
This is a wonderful verse from you Barbara.Best wishes in the contest.
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March 12, 2012 at 6:31 PM
Interesting thoughts -- loved it. 8) Always, Laura
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