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Femme Fatale

You clipped my wings You cured my flirt You blinded my sight From bevy of beauties. I'm a toy in your palm Administered unto your wish And, like powerful Samson I'm doomed! Love, Sweet bait Covering a naked hook The cemetary of my life.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/4/2011 11:42:00 PM
wow! Very EPIC... love it... adding this to my favorites.... i have not read much of your poems,,, but, i love this one.. LINDA
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Date: 11/4/2011 6:25:00 AM
very intersting point of view, nicely expressed, think I'd be inclined to add 'the' before 'bevy', just to help the language
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