Femme Fatale

You clipped my wings
You cured my flirt
You blinded my sight
From bevy of beauties.

I'm a toy in your palm
Administered unto your wish
And, like powerful Samson
I'm doomed!

Love,
Sweet bait
Covering a naked hook
The cemetary of my life.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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November 4, 2011 at 11:42 PM
wow! Very EPIC... love it... adding this to my favorites.... i have not read much of your poems,,, but, i love this one.. LINDA
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November 4, 2011 at 6:25 AM
very intersting point of view, nicely expressed, think I'd be inclined to add 'the' before 'bevy', just to help the language
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