Female

Pay attention to the warning signs
Something is not right when things are abnormal
Pain, heavy
Cancer cells get them out
Treat the beast early to live
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
June 4, 2010 at 9:36 AM
Doris, have you had personal experience or someone in your family? It's such a scary thing. Very nice for you to warn us. I hope I can reognize if something is "not right." Thanks also for your comment on my footles. I felt so disapponted that my daughter had no interest whatsoever in doing footles with me on our trip. Luv, andrea
Mills Avatar
June 1, 2010 at 4:06 PM
I agree, Great advice. Gets me thinking about overall intrinsic health. Thanks for reading my poems and the comments. Love, Susan
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June 1, 2010 at 2:24 PM
Strong poem, very powerful message. One thing that scares me most, are the signs. Did not expect to read such a thing. Now you have me thinking. Well done Doris, enjoyed,..p.d.
Knop Avatar
June 1, 2010 at 5:26 AM
Yes, Doris, I do hope that one day they will find a cure for all kinds of cancer!!! Thank you for your congrats on "The Sea"....Gert
Pickett Avatar
June 1, 2010 at 12:08 AM
I agree with Carolyn, early detection is key.... Good poem my friend...:JP]
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