Felt Right
This girl moves like a snake
to the beat gets me swaying
the lights glow on her
beautiful tan freckled face
her passion is breath taking
every time I close my eyes
she's still dancing around my
head to bad the last song
had to be played I would have
loved to stay in that perfect moment
with her in the middle of the
electric factory floor moving
not caring about the outside
world because right then nothing
mattered anymore i felt totally
free to be me
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