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Felt More Right

A soft whisper brought you to me Carried upon a cool gentle breeze To meet out on an emotional sea You came to me with an ease The waves murmured rolling tenderly The water a steely blue mirror Reflecting off its surface splendidly Two hearts together made it much clearer You're all my heart ever needed to know Under the stars on this chilly winter night As sure as the moons silvery beam glow My love for you has never felt more right 1st place in Brian Strands contest! 2/3/2020

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Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 2/7/2020 5:13:00 AM

Your poetry is right as rain, and insane beautiful. Glad I read your works, I can learn from it. Congrats xo

Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/9/2020 4:19:00 AM

Ah pixie thank you so very much! I love your work too!;)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/5/2020 12:19:00 PM

Beautiful, romantic sentiments for someone who is apparently very special. Beautifully penned.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/5/2020 2:34:00 PM

ML someone special? Well yes I suppose so! Lol don't catch me lying I write this to be writing ! See last tkmr I was here I wrote only sad poetry this time I write of love! Hoping one day to find it!;)

John Fleming

Date: 2/5/2020 11:29:00 AM

Upon having read through the poem, I thought to myself, "now this is all rather nice". It was only then that I realised it was another of your contest entries -- and yet another first place -- very well done, Poetess! Indeed, you are notching up an enviable reputation as a most accomplished and diversely capable writer in many differing poetic formats.Congratulations once again! In admiration. :) john

Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/5/2020 2:32:00 PM

John I do love your comments! Always supporting me and I am so grateful to you for that! Yes once again I placed but I think I will stop entering for awhile!;) hugs!;)