Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

Felt More Right

A soft whisper brought 
you to me
Carried upon a cool 
gentle breeze
To meet out on an 
emotional sea
You came to me 
with an ease

The waves murmured 
rolling tenderly
The water a steely 
blue mirror 
Reflecting off its surface
splendidly 
Two hearts together made 
it much clearer 

You're all my heart ever 
needed to know
Under the stars on this 
chilly winter night
As sure as the moons 
silvery beam glow
My love for you has never 
felt more right

1st place  in Brian Strands contest!

2/3/2020

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Mystic Rose Rose February 7, 2020 at 5:13 AM Your poetry is right as rain, and insane beautiful. Glad I read your works, I can learn from it. Congrats xo Brenda Chiri February 9, 2020 at 4:19 AM Ah pixie thank you so very much! I love your work too!;)

M. L. Kiser February 5, 2020 at 12:19 PM Beautiful, romantic sentiments for someone who is apparently very special. Beautifully penned. Brenda Chiri February 5, 2020 at 2:34 PM ML someone special? Well yes I suppose so! Lol don't catch me lying I write this to be writing ! See last tkmr I was here I wrote only sad poetry this time I write of love! Hoping one day to find it!;)

John Fleming February 5, 2020 at 11:29 AM Upon having read through the poem, I thought to myself, "now this is all rather nice". It was only then that I realised it was another of your contest entries -- and yet another first place -- very well done, Poetess! Indeed, you are notching up an enviable reputation as a most accomplished and diversely capable writer in many differing poetic formats.Congratulations once again! In admiration. :) john Brenda Chiri February 5, 2020 at 2:32 PM John I do love your comments! Always supporting me and I am so grateful to you for that! Yes once again I placed but I think I will stop entering for awhile!;) hugs!;)

Constance La France February 5, 2020 at 8:48 AM Brenda, congratulations on your win with this lovely poem in the contest _Constance Brenda Chiri February 5, 2020 at 10:09 AM Thank you Constance I appreciate that!;)

Gershon Wolf February 4, 2020 at 8:41 PM You ARE the Princess of Passion! ~ Once more with Feeling. ~ gw Brenda Chiri February 5, 2020 at 8:36 AM Haha! Thank you Gershon ! So very much appreciated!;) you are so silly!;)

Sandra Adams February 4, 2020 at 6:52 PM beautifully penned... congrats on your top win :) Brenda Chiri February 5, 2020 at 8:36 AM Thank you sandy!;)

Richard Lamoureux February 4, 2020 at 1:38 PM What a beautiful delicate write. Hugs Rick and thanks for your visit. Brenda Chiri February 5, 2020 at 8:35 AM Ahh Rick thank you!;) hugs!

Vijay Pandit February 4, 2020 at 7:08 AM Another #1 spot for you my friend--Congrats, Brenda! Brenda Chiri February 5, 2020 at 8:35 AM Vijay thank you my friend!;)

Swetha Vangaveti February 4, 2020 at 5:54 AM Such a beautiful piece!! Brenda Chiri February 5, 2020 at 8:35 AM Thank you so much!;)

Edward Ibeh February 4, 2020 at 5:49 AM Marvelous, romantic piece, Brenda:-)Congratulations on your top win! Brenda Chiri February 4, 2020 at 5:51 AM As congrats to you on your win my friend!;) thank you!;)

Gary Radice February 4, 2020 at 3:51 AM Congratulations Brenda :) Brenda Chiri February 4, 2020 at 5:49 AM Thank you Gary!;)

Eve Roper February 3, 2020 at 10:53 PM very romantic, loved it... Brenda Chiri February 4, 2020 at 1:53 AM I am so glad Eve! I really appreciate your comments and read! ;)

Tom Cunningham February 3, 2020 at 10:56 AM I'm with Kim, you write romance perfectly, Brenda. Tom Brenda Chiri February 3, 2020 at 11:11 AM Ahh thank you so much Tom!;)

Kim Rodrigues February 3, 2020 at 7:29 AM Brenda, so beautifully romantic! Brenda Chiri February 3, 2020 at 10:30 AM Thank you so much Kim!;)