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Entry for This or That, Vol 31 Poetry Contest: Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh        

 

Some time ago, when we were free to do;        ten I was, or twelve? I walked along a misty lane to school the etched patterns of ferns and trees   on my window when I awoke          now echoed in the frozen grass                  and early ferns              being gently crushed        by each step I took. The sun had begun its morning due           to warm the earth, and generate the day's miasma mist; as did the breathing of the gathering crowd,               which hung upon the hedge           of privet, hawthorn, yew,       to rest upon a thousand spider webs                a myriad of droplets dew. And there it was         the spider              fat and yellow;                  waiting. Not in the shadows,       as the others I had seen              but, eight legs akimbo in the centre of it's now opaque web                 taunting. I had a cricket in a matchbox             in my pocket A prize from yesterday's   sweet forage.    I placed the wriggling insect upon the web and watched                the attack           the bite    the wrap. And so I write

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Date: 4/9/2025 9:03:00 AM
Hey Terry, I just started scrolling the list from Edward's contest. I like to read some of the others for perspective. I saw your entry. You had me up until the end. Is this a true story?
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/9/2025 2:15:00 PM
Hey Trina, thank you for the visit and reading my poem, indeed it is a true story
Date: 4/7/2025 4:32:00 AM
Terry, this is such a superb piece. I love the presentation, too. It looks quite nice on the page. Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/7/2025 7:43:00 AM
Thank you Edward for the placement, kind comments and for running the very interesting, sometimes taxing contests
Date: 3/23/2025 8:14:00 PM
Very enjoyable whimsy and caprice, Terry. Thanks, Gershon
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Terry Miller
Date: 3/28/2025 2:08:00 AM
Thank you Gershon
Date: 3/20/2025 10:03:00 PM
Those childhood memories stay with you forever, it's a shame we have to grow old. Good luck in the contest Terry. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Terry Miller
Date: 3/28/2025 2:08:00 AM
Thank you Tom enjoy your weekend too
Date: 3/20/2025 9:00:00 PM
Thank you for taking me on that journey with you. Reminiscent of years gone by. The ending,… well 10 year-old boys will be 10 year-old boys that’s what they did :) nature at work. Well written Terry. Cheers.
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Terry Miller
Date: 3/28/2025 2:09:00 AM
Thank you Margaret

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