Feisty Feline

The grief that you brought to me Is unparalleled to a burning malady Each miniscule reckoned; nimble spur Comrades' perturbed; peeled exterior A visceral feline that's so endeared Suddenly spent and disappeared Lingering with bated breath And keeping the faith To have you back ...come down the pike 08.28.17
Second Place on Silent One's Iconic Song "Sweet Child O' Mine" (Guns N' Roses)
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September 4, 2017 at 1:58 PM
Congrats on your win Moon Flower
Flower Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 11:09 PM
Thank you, Joseph. :)
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September 4, 2017 at 8:38 AM
Some great lines in this poem Moon.. Great couplets, except the last one does not rhyme.. wonderful poem though.. congratulations on your placement..
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September 4, 2017 at 10:33 AM
I'm much obliged, SO. Keep it up!
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