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Feisty Breezes

Feisty breezes blow through the trees shaking and tussling twigs and leaves. Often, gusts begin as a breeze feisty breezes rustle the trees. Grounding the butterflies and bees breezes come and go as they please. Feisty breezes blow through the trees shaking and tussling twigs and leaves. Breezes come and go as they please, mayhem following in their wake. Plants left in a state of unease breezes come and go as they please. Flexible trees bend to their knees all day and night without a break. Breezes come and go as they please, mayhem following in their wake. All-day and night without a break, blowing breezes lead the attack. And though trees are hardy, they shake all day and night without a break. Creaking as though in constant ache, they're unable to spring back. All-day and night without a break, blowing breezes lead the attack. (Triple Triolet) 6/30/2018
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Gauthier Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 5:50 PM
Lovely, Emile. Well done.
Pinet Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 8:14 AM
Thank you so much Line, your support is appreciated my friend, Emile.
Man Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 5:19 PM
Nice triple triolet, Emile!
Pinet Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 8:14 AM
Thank you so much Lyric Man, your support is appreciated my friend, Emile.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 4:47 PM
A fave! Love this!
Pinet Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 8:13 AM
Thank you so much Kim, your support is appreciated my friend, Emile.
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