Feels Abandoned

I feel so abandoned, When you left me alone. So sad.. So sick.. I want to find you quick. Even if I know you will never come back again , ... But in my heart your always been stayin'. I don't want to have anything , Because of you I have everything. But when you left me standing , I have now , NOTHING . Tears in my eyes falling , And my heart is fast bleeding . Remember me always and forever , And I will not erase our best memories , NEVER..!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 3/4/2012 2:30:00 PM
The ones who leave you don't love you. The ones that love you don't leave you. Very good poem. Congrats on it being featured this week! God Bless!
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Date: 2/27/2012 6:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Neil. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/23/2012 9:44:00 AM
congrats Neil on a wonderful win for this exciting entry luv..
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Date: 2/23/2012 6:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "(Any) Poem Of the week" contest Neil. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/22/2012 11:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Neil. This is an interesting write.
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Date: 2/22/2012 10:30:00 PM
NEIL.. CONGRATUALTIONS! with your poem of the week... thank you for supporting my contest ;-) ~ always*PD
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Neil Dinoy
Date: 2/23/2012 2:48:00 AM
Your always welcome !
Date: 2/22/2012 6:02:00 AM
Treasure your memories Neil.. good and bad, they make us who we are. Welcome to soup xx
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Neil Dinoy
Date: 2/23/2012 2:49:00 AM
I will Tracie !
Date: 2/22/2012 5:58:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Neil. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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