Feelings To Kill

Some days I watched
Sometimes I cried
Most days I dreamed
It felt unreal

It felt too far
To leave a scar
Too hard to stare
No one would dare

Intense
The howl within
A broken violin
Plays my chagrin

Nothing lasts 
Go back, go back
A sounding blast
In the shark’s playground

Some days I watched
Sometimes I cried
Most days I dreamed
Of synthetic happiness
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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June 13, 2009 at 7:02 AM
Lovely write Analie>James
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December 4, 2008 at 3:50 PM
I love IT!!!! Keep'em coming, Cause you're REALLY GOOD!!! Love Alexz ^_^
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