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Feelings Still Remain

Time is something no one individual can control One day you wake up one morning with a great goal Then the next minute you find yourself in a hole A great story sometimes has a dark end Only in fairy tales you see that happy forever trend No matter how long and clear a relationship may last It can still wind up in the corner with stained glass Month one We are feeling how each other operate Staying up past sunset just so I can say I heard your voice real late The path is not crooked I must say it’s pretty straight Looking for the flaws in you I sit in a corner and wait Not finding any in you must be a good trait A relationship so great most can’t even relate Knowing this is early on all but is this destiny or fate Month two A rock was thrown at us up clear and out the blue Who were they trying to hit Was it me or was it you Someone does not approve and thinks our relationship needs to go under review Who are we kidding we are so blinded by our feelings we can’t even see through So forget who threw the rock we are stuck together like a tattoo Month three Oh damn we are falling apart how could this be We have only been together up till month three Breaking up with you is something I can’t agree Maybe it is that time to set the one we love free But setting you free means I got to let you fly with all that debris People are low down dirty snakes and that’s something I can foresee But you and I can no longer be together which is something I must disagree So much for that story booking ending we thought we were going to have The feelings I have for you still last We might be looking through some new glass But at the end of the day you’re still the last on my brain We no longer need to pop the bottle of champagne Because we lost our tickets and missed the train Just because our relationship may have been flushed down the drain My feeling for you is like the dirt you can’t see and they still remain © Jeremy Fennell

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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