Feelings Still Remain

Time is something no one individual can control
One day you wake up one morning with a great goal
Then the next minute you find yourself in a hole
A great story sometimes has a dark end
Only in fairy tales you see that happy forever trend
No matter how long and clear a relationship may last
It can still wind up in the corner with stained glass

Month one
We are feeling how each other operate
Staying up past sunset just so I can say I heard your voice real late
The path is not crooked I must say it’s pretty straight
Looking for the flaws in you I sit in a corner and wait
Not finding any in you must be a good trait 
A relationship so great most can’t even relate
Knowing this is early on all but is this destiny or fate

Month two
A rock was thrown at us up clear and out the blue
Who were they trying to hit
Was it me or was it you
Someone does not approve and thinks our relationship needs to go under review
Who are we kidding we are so blinded by our feelings we can’t even see through
So forget who threw the rock we are stuck together like a tattoo

Month three
Oh damn we are falling apart how could this be
We have only been together up till month three
Breaking up with you is something I can’t agree
Maybe it is that time to set the one we love free
But setting you free means I got to let you fly with all that debris
People are low down dirty snakes and that’s something I can foresee
But you and I can no longer be together which is something I must disagree

So much for that story booking ending we thought we were going to have
The feelings I have for you still last
We might be looking through some new glass
But at the end of the day you’re still the last on my brain
We no longer need to pop the bottle of champagne 
Because we lost our tickets and missed the train
Just because our relationship may have been flushed down the drain
My feeling for you is like the dirt you can’t see and they still remain

© Jeremy Fennell

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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